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Solitude...
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| Photo Information |
Copyright: Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona (drackness)
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 868 W: 60 N: 615]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (3722) |
| Genre: People |
| Medium: Color |
| Date Taken: 2006-12-03 |
| Categories: Artwork |
| Camera: FujiFilm FinePix Z1 |
| Photo Version: Original Version |
| Date Submitted: 2006-12-04 3:32 |
| Viewed: 437 |
| Points: 10 |
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| [Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish] |
Another photo of Jessy in hosteria of the Bohemian... I like the illumination and decided not to lose the opportunity to capture the moment...
Your glance leaves to me
in this austere night,
goes away without saying good bye,
leaving a card me of goodbye in the bureau,
without at least turning around
and giving at least one last cautious
one to me of bitter end...
you leave me appearing with the edge
of your good bye in the edge of your lips,
cutting them...
leaving invisible wounds
in each one of them...
hurt produced by silence...
by mutis of your voice that
to shouts requests to be released...
to leave its prison of silence...
my tears free one by one,
by each word of affection
that you do not say to me,
fall as kamikazes and dies
in the air before touching the ground,
they disappear and they are
confused with the atmosphere
to be running with you,
and to arrive transformed
into an invisible kiss
that never you will feel...
a kiss that commands to you
with the heavy eyelids that fall
by each extra that wants send to you...
a kiss that single I will know
that i give you...
and that I know that it arrived to you...
a kiss drowned in sea of tears
with one hundred pretexts for take the love. |
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Excellent gothic mood here! The light and "washed" colours emphases it even more. Well done.
~Hugs!~
mArtynas
Hi Luis,
A wonderful composition.Great lightning.Nice exposure.Best regards.
hAyAti
Hello Dear LUIS
It’s a marvelous shot and I believe you took it very well. Every thing is fine. I read your comment about this photo and I found it perfect. I give it useful mark.
Have a good time
Saman
Hi Luis,
original idea. Great light and POV. Well done my dear friend. I like the note.
Have a great week.
All the best,
Ioana
- cokke
(4359)
- [2006-12-06 0:54]
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Hola vecino, de esta foto rescato los colores y la iluminación de la escena, asi como su composición que me parecieron acertados, de la calidad, dudo un poco...
