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Why?
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Copyright: Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona (drackness) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 868 W: 60 N: 615] (3722)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-12-15
Categories: Macro
Camera: FujiFilm FinePix Z1
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-12-22 4:16
Viewed: 510
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish]
Why people do not accept so which to you are?, often the people turn around and they offer its better smile to you and in its mind they criticize to you, end thoughts against tí... the certain thing to you is that each person is different and such is due to accept as is, to feel proud of one same one and not to leave no word collapses to you... we must be as we are, as the others do not want that we are...
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Hi Luis,
The way Jessy is posing here is great and you capture it very well my friend it's a bit mystic how Jessy looks upwards. Regarding you question in your note: yes I a agree it doesn't feel good if you have the impression people don't speak up honestly. For me it doesn't matter how the outside is, is a matter of a good attitude and respect to each other. Keep on going with these interesting postings Luis. Hven nice days and a nmery christmas.
Hans

Hi Luis,
Very nice portrait.Good pose.Colours, sharp And POV are perfect.Well done.TFS and regards.

hAyAti

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  • valari Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 964 W: 102 N: 395] (4105)
  • [2006-12-22 16:21]

Hi,Luis,nice work and exactly note!


Have a wonderful calm holidays!
Merry Christmas and love,val

Hi Luis, nice portrait, she is very beautiful more than that... spectacular and your portraits of her express her very well. If people do not accept her maybe they are affraid because of her superiority and difference. their loss.
Patrick

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  • cokke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 433 W: 109 N: 909] (4355)
  • [2006-12-23 1:20]

Hola Vecino, está es una de las mejores tomas que te eh visto realizar aqui en Treklens, buenos colores e iluminación, solo un detalle... cuida mucho las particulas que se pueden observar, no se si sea porque el lente este sucio, por el reflejo de la luz o algun otro factor, ojo, desmerita el buen trabajo que realizaste.
Una abrazo y feliz navidad en compañia de los tuyos.

Hi Luis, nice photo for the model. The pose is natural-looking. On the technical side, though, I think that the light was a bit bright as her hand and lower cheekbone got a bit too much of the light, I can see why from the black garb she's wearing. The other thing would have been to keep the perpendicular line of the wall corner perpendicular in PP.

this is a very relaxed and attractive pose and shot. good job luis. well done.

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