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Miriam


Miriam
Photo Information
Copyright: Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona (drackness) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 868 W: 60 N: 615] (3722)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-10-18
Categories: Humorous
Camera: FujiFilm FinePix Z1
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Models of Drackness [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-10-21 11:01
Viewed: 898
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish]
This time I present/display my Miriam friend to them, a good friend student of the UPN (National University Pedagogical), that is sexy to us in this occasion very, I hope that they like... is the first time that take photographies to her, thinks that they think to see if we continued taking photos to she or not, hehehehe...
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Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To hamed31568: thanks my friend...drackness 1 11-08 22:31
To katya534: hi Katyadrackness 1 10-30 04:26
To evildrako: hi hichemdrackness 1 10-26 04:35
To muzamal: hi Muzamaldrackness 1 10-23 04:45
To cokke: saludos vecinodrackness 1 10-23 04:31
To nofer: Thanks Reynaldodrackness 1 10-23 04:29
To rewshearer: thanks Rewdrackness 1 10-23 04:28
To mburraco: Vaya!!!drackness 1 10-23 04:26
To onmax: Hola Carlosdrackness 1 10-23 04:25
To nova: thanks Micheldrackness 1 10-23 04:23
To GOLDEN_HAWK: gracias Héctordrackness 1 10-23 04:23
To Shogun: thanks Aldrackness 1 10-23 04:22
To pablominto: thanks PAblodrackness 1 10-23 04:21
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Hello Luis,
A beautiful woman, very feminine, very Hispanic!
You portray her very well and I'm pretty sure she likes this photograph herself...
Nice work!
Greetings,
Pablo -

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  • Shogun Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 832 W: 52 N: 418] (10391)
  • [2006-10-21 12:08]
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Beautiful Luis. nice one! TFS

Shogun

HAS TOMADO COLORES MI KERIDO LUIS ES BUENO COMPARTIR A LOS AMIGOS Y VEO QUE TU TIENES VARIOS, EN LO QUE RESPECTA A LA TOMA COMO SIEMPRE BIEN LOGRADA Y LA MODELO LINDA FELICIADES

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2735 W: 263 N: 864] (8653)
  • [2006-10-21 12:59]
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Wow! This is a very nice portrait! I love the way that her left arm is posed,identical to the tree branch! This is very well composed and the colors are just fine! Bravo! Michel

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  • onmax Silver Star Critiquer [C: 18 W: 6 N: 3] (323)
  • [2006-10-21 13:25]
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Pienso que si debes seguir sacandole fotos, ella se muestra bien y es muy fotografica, sigan haciendo que las espero.
Saludos

"... alabim Bom bam!, Mexico, Mexico, Ra Ra RA!.
Que decir Ortega Carmona!?!?!.
Me sumo a la caterva de "criticos" en el pedido de más fotos de Miriam.
Los colores son muy buenos, aunque la has "lavado" un poco, la foto ha quedado muy buena!.
Aguante la foto a color!, je!.

Un saludo!

Mauro

Hi Luis
Yes, please do more shots of Miriam. She is a pretty model.
However I think you did some blur in post production, I think it spoils the photograph - I would like to see it more natural.
Also be careful about the strong shine on her shoulder, it is overexposed and it is very distracting.
Thanks for sharing
Rew

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  • nofer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 847 W: 272 N: 495] (1726)
  • [2006-10-21 21:42]
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Linda composição. Boas cores. Linda moça. Lindo lugar!
Muito bem executado. Parabéns.
TFS
Reynaldo

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  • cokke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 433 W: 109 N: 909] (4359)
  • [2006-10-22 0:11]
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Hola Vecino, te escribire fria y calculadoramente, esta foto en su concepto es muy buena, bien definidos los detalles, buenos colores, correcta aplicación de filtros... pero... solo un pequeño detalles que debes de tomar en cuenta como fotografo... la mirada de la modelo ¿cerro los ojos?, ¿te gano al disparo?
¿ó papadeo antes?, gracias a las posibilidades de la fotografia digital, tenias que haber repetido la imagen, bueno...

hy luis,
great shot and good idea
WELL DONE:)

Muzamal

Hi luis,
superb photo, i like the light effect a lot,
very nice composition and colors.
Well done
Hichem

The composition is excellent, and the girl is gorgeous. I am not sure about what's happening with her left eye. It looks slightly blured. Is it a result of PP? Also, the patches of white sky break the magic of the scene.

Katya
P.S. Pts later.

i see you have added quite a few intersting photos while i was away :) very nice model, pose and the glow on her skin. well done to you both.

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