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Happy Birthday Oriana


Happy Birthday Oriana
Photo Information
Copyright: Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona (drackness) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 868 W: 60 N: 615] (3722)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-11-11
Categories: Nature
Camera: FujiFilm FinePix Z1
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-11-13 4:28
Viewed: 599
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish]
Two followed birthdays... first birthday of Oriana... later the birthday of Zyanya... This photo I raise slow so that the 11 that was Oriana's bithday... already a photo had upload and it did not have one of her, 12 yesterday, was the birthday of my daughter and had to upload it in that good day...... Oriana, HAPPY BIRTHDAY, I put many photos taken in its celebration, this friend I knew it by my dear friend Jessy to whom I am been thankful to him to appear to this so pretty girl... Oriana is the one that appears more times in the photos...
If i need to choose two stars
to illuminate my life;
i choose your eyes without
thinking more than a one time...
If i need to choose a reason
to wake up to me daily;
your smile would make me
begin day to day with happiness...
If i need to choose the angel
who thinks that all we have;
you would be the chosen one
to guide this lost soul by the footpaths...
and is that... in each step that you give...
each glance that you give...
each words that you say...
each smile that takes the wind from you...
make me think that the angels exist...
and that I found one
the day that I knew you...
today in your birthday...
I give thousand hugs you...
i write thousand poems to you...
I give stars to you.
I give the sunsets to you...
but mainly... I give in these words...
to a person who will be
with you at any moment...
in good and bad steps...
I offer my company to you from here...
until the eternity can reach to us...
my dear Oriana...
Happy Birthday...

Greetings to all those that appear in the photos that nonmemory the single name of all... only of Oriana... Jessy... Cristiane.. Inna... Heidi... and until I appear shaved singing in karaoke, that so crazy world...
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Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To cokke: gracias vecinodrackness 1 11-15 04:21
To John_F_Kennedy: Thanks Achim...drackness 1 11-15 04:11
To law: thanks lawdrackness 1 11-15 04:07
To ioana_tm: Thanks Ioanadrackness 1 11-15 04:05
To mburraco: Gracias Maurodrackness 1 11-15 04:03
To Aida: thanks Aida..drackness 1 11-15 04:00
To samansarraf: thanks samandrackness 1 11-15 03:59
To cse: thanks Cihan...drackness 1 11-13 05:56
To hay_kes: thanks my dear friend...drackness 1 11-13 05:55
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Hi my dear friend Luis,
Very nice presentation picture.Excellent composition.Good work.Congrast!
HAPPY BİRTDAY ORİANA!!!

hAyAti

Hi Luis
A nice shot and very well done . I love its composition . I read your comment about this photo and I found it perfect , in this result I give it useful mark .
Good luck
Saman

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  • Aida Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 275 W: 47 N: 206] (2224)
  • [2006-11-13 8:09]
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Hola Luis,

Happy birthday for your friend.
I like very much the happiness of your photo and the composition you have done with it. But you could have eliminated the red eyes on the main photo...

Regards,
Aida

Bueno, se ve que la pasan bien por aqullos pagos!. Muy buena la pegatina de fotos!. Muy lindas las "chichis" y quiero destacar la cara de concentraciín de Drackness entonando el Karaoke!.
Saludos y a ver cuando repartís hermano!

Mauro

Hi Luis,
another great photo of yours, full of warm feelings. You really are a great friend! Lovely poem my dear friend.

All the best,
Ioana

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  • law Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 509 W: 75 N: 80] (1764)
  • [2006-11-13 20:22]
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The layout is great, Luis. Well shot and nicely done. Happy Birthday Oriana :D

Wonderful image, with great expressions and fantastic lights!
Achim

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  • cokke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 433 W: 109 N: 909] (4355)
  • [2006-11-14 21:06]
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Hola Vecino, puedo rescatar de esta foto las expresiones de las chicas, en especial en la foto a colores, fotograficamente hablando prefiero no ser protagonico y ser quien transmita por medio de la lente, la emoción del momento.

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  • cse Gold Star Critiquer [C: 276 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-11-18 8:46]
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Hello Luis,
a very good birthday present. I want to say "happy birtday" in my motherlanguage:
iyi ki dogdun Oriana!
I liked this collage but i wish you wouldnt cut the girls' feet in the main-biggest photo.

Best wishes,
Cihan Selcuk Eksi

ps:points later

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