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Copyright: Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona (drackness) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 868 W: 60 N: 615] (3722)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-10-18
Categories: Macro
Camera: FujiFilm FinePix Z1
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-03-13 5:36
Viewed: 542
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish]
Your day begins with the visit to a dear friend, to who you have an enormous desire to see, you arrive at the place from the appointment minutes, delays before impatient to see it and arrives at the scheduled time, talk a little time and crosses its school, is going to eat with the friends of her and the very pleasant continuous talk... the food finishes and they go to see a football's game, while your friend watches the game, you steel a photo to she with the fixed glance... What will be thinking?

Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona
http://www.ferortega.com/fotografias.htm

"you lose yourself in the labyrinth of your thoughts, while I am shipwrecked in the sea of your glance..."
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Hi Luis,
very nice mood in this one. I like very much the look in her eyes, peacefull one. Nice blur effect. Lovely! I like it very much. Congrats!

Kindly regards,
Ioana

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yep, it's a good portrait

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Nice portrait and good words...
val :)

Wow, Luis - this is an excellent composition. The placement of your subject is incredibly powerful, making excellent use of open space and drawing attention up to her eyes. She's beautiful, too!
A shame that the sharpness isn't 100% on her eyes, which is where it needs to be. But in many ways this is one of your best photographs in my opinion.
Well done
Rew

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3581 W: 737 N: 2416] (19140)
  • [2007-03-14 5:33]

Wonderful moody portrait, Luis.

v

Luis, after long time see your post. Nice moody capture of her expressions. :-) Vandana

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  • cokke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 433 W: 109 N: 909] (4359)
  • [2007-03-14 14:58]

Vecino, solo un pero le pongo a esta foto, el fondo... para mi gusto un fondo neutro quedaria perfecto, la chica es muy bella y como que las rejas no van con ella, buen trabajo.

Muy buena foto!, aunque me intriga quienes estaba jugando!.
La niña esta creo que ya la tenías fotografiada y había hecho mis elogios!.
Sale muy bien fotografiada cuando no está mirando a la cámara y muy lindo el detalle del rojo en los labios, me gustó toda la foto!

Saludos!

Mauro

Bonita foto. Ella pierde la mirada, ensimismada en sus pensamientos. La cámara parece una entrometida, pero no llega a molestar. Como quien mira a través del ojo de la cerradura. Parece un momento muy íntimo. Estupenda.
SAludos, Fernando.

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