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Copyright: Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona (drackness) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 868 W: 60 N: 615] (3722)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-04-26
Categories: Macro
Camera: FujiFilm FinePix Z1
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-04-27 16:38
Viewed: 704
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish]
You rise with the spirit by the ground, without many desire to do nothing, the sadness floods your tired glance of as much excrement of this world... you put to showers it and you take more of the account, thinking while the thousands of drops fall on your body, salts, dry to you and you fix yourself as rapidly as possible, you see the clock and you go late... You arrive at the photography store and they say to you that you return in one hour, the impressions not yet ready, angered salts to have breakfast first that you find, you put to an establishment of colonel Sanders and eat with lack of appetite... accounts the time; one hour exact. You return by the photographies that you had in charge and return to see the clock... She is going to you to kill, is to late... There is no time to go in the metro, so you move the hand and you stop the first taxi that happens... You arrive half an hour with from delay and tehre this she with another friend... You salute and begin char it, its other friend it is excused and it disappeared and these solo with her... after all it gives fear to think you about the identical thing that they are, is the only friend who you have and only that includes/understands to you... eat and after jokes the world returns yet to remain single... Your spirits return to raised, after all your friend knows like make you smile, afternoon it dies with a little Rob Tomas in the air and smiles in the soul... These forehead to her and sights their eyes, give account you that you must to him enough and you say it accompanied of Thanks... The time has not stopped and is hour to leave, you take leave with a hug and a photography that when seeing it close by you can see that the sadness nonsingle this in you... in its glance also lives...

Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona

"the sadness is a disease that single manages to cure it the friendship"
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Estás muy potente, amigo Fernando. Te prometo que no hago trampas, y me he detenido en esta foto porque destacaba dentro de la galería, no sólo porque me guste visitarte. Un retrato, (de una mujer, y un momento) estupendo.
Y me gusta mucho ese escrito tan tuyo en segunda persona. Hace que te impliques aún más.
En fin, artista, un abrazo.

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  • Suerte Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 512 W: 64 N: 226] (3144)
  • [2007-04-28 12:34]

wonderful effect, grat in bw, great mood!
tfs!

Hola Luis,
waw! This one takes my breath away... I think is the best B&W seen lately on TL. Great athmosphere in it. Fantastic angle of shot and look in her eyes. Artistic and original one. Luis I'm realy impressed by this one. Artwork!

Kindly regards,
Ioana

Muy buena esta foto Che!. Todo lleva a lograr el mejor "clima"... desde el color, la oscuridad, las palabras!. Todo!.
Muy bueno! la verdad es que esta foto está muy buena!,

Saludos!

Mauro

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