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Clown


Clown
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Copyright: Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona (drackness) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 868 W: 60 N: 615] (3722)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-05-26
Categories: Macro
Camera: FujiFilm FinePix Z1
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-06-08 15:04
Viewed: 616
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish]
CLOWN
Fernando Z. Maldonado
Player: Javier Solis

In coffer of hypocrisy
before hidden people my defeat
clown with joy mask
but I on the inside have
the broken soul

In the fatal track of my fake
a bad woman crossed the way
I am rythim that game with my life
but I feel that my soul is lost

Clown, I am a sad clown
that hidden my failure
with laughter and joys
that they fill to me of scare

Clown, I am a sad clown
that in the middle of the night
I lose myself in the darkness
with my laughter and my weeping

I cannot support my mask
before the world I am laughing
and within my chest my heart suffering
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Interesting composition of something funny looking very sad..ironic
Well done, nice colours

Hi Luis
Lovely clown portrait and colours.
Beautiful details.WEll done.TFS.
greetings
H.Ayhan

Grunkel "Cacho" Abramov, el famoso Clown del Troskismo!, tambien conocido como el "payaso barricada" y Padre de "Bombita Rodriguez": el palito Ortega Montonero!.
Muy buena la foto! y bienvenido de regreso!.
Habra que ponerse al día!.

Saludos

Mauro

Olá Luis

Amei esta foto...o palhaço está meio zangado e esta expressão ficou ótima.
Muito bom trabalho, meus parabéns.
Grande abraço,
Vera

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