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Copyright: Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona (drackness) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 868 W: 60 N: 615] (3722)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-09-09
Categories: Portrait
Camera: FujiFilm FinePix Z1
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/125 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-10-02 20:48
Viewed: 477
Points: 14
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I like this shot, well done.
Rew

This looks good to me Luis , the B&W mediun is a fine choice to convey the feeling here , a tad bright on her left shoulder though but i think it is not such an important issue as the treatment , the composition compensate largely , like it !
compliments,
Carol

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3274 W: 268 N: 7754] (33070)
  • [2008-10-04 3:13]

Hi Luis Fernando
She does look an unhappy lady - but I think she is a confident lady wearing the black make-up so confidently.
I like your cropping and how close you are to her,
Well done
Janice

Good portrait in B&W. Special but perfect.
Well done. Good contrats and light.

Regards
Daisy

Hi Luis. good portrait. Emotional. Soon Mari

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  • Koala Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 391 W: 32 N: 90] (4023)
  • [2008-10-12 2:07]

Very good choice for b&w.
her dramatic look fits very well.great portrait!

Have a nice sunday!

Alexandra

Hola Luis

You have beautiful pictures in B/W.
this here, her I think a shop window mannequin.
Good contrats and light.
I like his face
and you made good use of the b/w
congratulations!

Sérgio

Good choice of subject for a b&w shot and the model really does reflect an air of sadness and melancholy. Personally I like the contrast between the bright shoulder on the right and the darkness on the left - was this intentional?
Thanks for sharing
Mark

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