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Oration of an unemployed person


Oration of an unemployed person
Photo Information
Copyright: Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona (drackness) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 868 W: 60 N: 615] (3722)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-10-30
Categories: Portrait
Camera: FujiFilm FinePix Z1
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-11-10 21:11
Viewed: 346
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish]
Father, from skies low, I have forgotten the orations that the grandmother taught to me, poor, she rests now, it does not have to wash, to clean, does not have that to worry walking the day about the clothes, it does not have to guard the night, it suffers and it suffers, to say, to ask things, fight sweetly. From skies low you, if you are, come then, that I starve in this corner, that I do not know as what serves to have been born, that I watch the rejected hands, that there is no work, it does not have, low a little, contemplates this that I am, this broken shoe, this anguish, this empty stomach, this city without bread for my teeth, the fever digging to me the meat, this to sleep thus, under the rain, punished by the cold, persecuted I say that I do not understand to you, Father, low, touch me the soul, see my heart, I did not rob, did not assassinate, was young and however they strike to me and they strike, I say that I do not understand to you, Father, low, if you are, that I look for resignation in me and I do not have and I go to take hold the rage to me and to sharpen it in order to beat and I go to shout to blood in neck so that I cannot more, I have kidneys and I am a man, low, what has done of your creature, Father? a furious animal that the stone of the street chews?

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merhaba luis
wonderful portrait picture.excellent lovely clown and colours.well done.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

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  • clnaef Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 996 W: 54 N: 31] (5769)
  • [2008-11-10 22:58]

Bonjour,
Agréable portrait bien coloré.
Bonne journée.
clnaef

jaja que imagen tan comica! buena captura Fernando :)

Olá Luis

Que foto divertida...que cores vivas, são cores de palhaço...
Gosto da alegria dele neste momento da foto.;)
Parabéns
GA
Vera

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  • Saba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 587 W: 0 N: 1601] (9179)
  • [2008-11-12 15:08]

Hello Luis!
Very curious portrait...colors, focus and light.
Greetings.
Barbara

Hi Luis,
Nice catch here and good portait of this clown,
Excellent colors and details,
very well done.
Michel

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  • cinca Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 327 W: 2 N: 143] (4452)
  • [2009-04-02 13:19]

Hi Louis, you have captured a strong expression according to your note. great colours and light too.
best regards, cinzia

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