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Clase de computo II


Clase de computo II
Photo Information
Copyright: Alfonso Torres (tlacoyoweb) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 179 W: 48 N: 130] (786)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-01-30
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: contax G1, Carl Zeiss G 90 mm, Kodak TRI-X 400
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Mis B & N, Mi Contax G [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-12-02 4:43
Viewed: 352
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
No cabe duda de que desde la introducción de los ordenadores, nada es igual este mundo, y eso incluye el aspecto educativo.
En la foto mi hijita Ana Laura de cinco años durante una de sus clases de computación en su ultimo año de pre-escolar.
Si bien la foto tiene un ligero problema de desenfoque, dadas las pobres condiciones de luz, la poca profundidad de campo pero sobre todo por los conocidos problemas del distanciómetro de este por otro lado fabuloso lente Carl Zeiss 90 mm, presento esta imagen en el foro de TL pues me gustó el gesto de concentración de mi pequeñita ante la pantalla y el teclado de la computadora.

Since the introduction of the computers, nothing is equal in this world, and that includes the educative aspect. In the photo my little girl Ana Laura of five years in her classes of computation during her last year of pre-school.
Although the photo has a problem of defocusing, given the poor conditions of light, the little depth of field but mainly by the well-known problems of the distanciometer of this -on the other hand- fabulous Carl Zeiss 90 mm lens, I present this image in the TL forum because I liked the gesture of concentration of my little girl in front of the screen and the keyboard of the computer.
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To mbrito: Gracias Josetlacoyoweb 1 12-04 03:52
To Teresat: Hi Teresattlacoyoweb 1 12-04 03:50
To rewshearer: Gracias Rewtlacoyoweb 1 12-02 18:13
To banaei: Thanks Mohammadtlacoyoweb 1 12-02 07:02
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Hi Alfonso
I like the perspective you've chosen for this image

TFS
**MAB**

A very good capture of expression - certainly concentrating hard!

This would be improved if you cropped it - top, bottom, and certainly the right-hand-side - to move the face of your daughter away from the centre of the shot.

I like the graininess of the photo, and the resolution is fine IMO.

I love that hand poised up over the keyboard!

Rew

Hello Alfonso
Excelent face expession capture and a successful composition. Very good the b/w work where even the soft noise works ok adding a great mood. Beautiful photo.
Congrats, mb

Boa noite Alfonso
The model is great but you captured awondeful expression and mouvement. Lovely and well done.
My regards
Teresat

Bonita foto, efectivamente nada es igual....para mi es bueno mezclar químicos de vez en cuando y jugar con las concentraciones y temperatura..... una buena distracción para apartarse por unos momentos del computador...

Saludos desde caracas

Alfonso,
Despite all the difficulties you were able to get a great shot of this nice moment.
Well done
Wellington

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