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Seduction


Seduction
Photo Information
Copyright: Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona (drackness) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 868 W: 60 N: 615] (3722)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-10-14
Categories: Macro
Camera: FujiFilm FinePix Z1
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Just Black and white, Models of Drackness [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-10-15 9:39
Viewed: 502
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish]
After the photo of crucifixio, I have again Mary, our dear friend, this time here seducing the camera, she says that she is not seen so seductive, you you think and denle advice to improve, to my likes much its expression but we would like to know opinions, greetings
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  • ariw Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 156 W: 30 N: 173] (2236)
  • [2006-10-15 9:45]
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Hi Luis, she is indeed gorgeous. The lighting was a bit harsh in her face, hair and fingers. You should control the lighting and shadowing and this certainly can be done through post processing work. A little sharpening in her eyes I think would make things a bit different. Cheers my friend,

**AW

i think she look more like she's playing with the camera here Luis :)

try a lower POV and less smile to get that seductive look :)
you'll be surprise how sedutive a relax lips can look on camera :)
one trick i use is to tell my model to breath though their mouths, that would keep the lips slightly open and relax :)

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  • cokke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 433 W: 109 N: 909] (4355)
  • [2006-10-15 21:54]
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Vecino... algo asi esperaba en el autoretrato, como siempre lo eh comentado.. no existe la foto perfecta... esta en particular es agradable a la vista, una picara sonrisa, complice del fotografo para lograr este buen trabajo, saludos y un abrazo.

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  • BOBAN Gold Star Critiquer [C: 90 W: 0 N: 0] (167)
  • [2006-10-15 22:46]
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VERY COOL SHOT.............REGARDS BOBAN.

Hola Luis! la verdad es que ella se porta bien ante la cámara. Wenging te ha dado unos buenos consejos como para que salga "mas natural". Para mí la foto está buena y Mary no tiene problema es aparecer como Jessy!.
Tal vez solo su Look es un poco "raro", por el toque platinado que es "llamativo"!.
Igual, me gusta como aparece y seguiré viendo sus fotos!.

Un saludo!

Mauro

La expresión de la modelo me parece perfecta, llena de complicidad hacia el fotógrafo. Como pega le pondría los brillos del flash en la cara, que no ayudan a la imagen. Con todo es una toma que me gusta. Un saludo.

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