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Cementery
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Copyright: Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona (drackness) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 868 W: 60 N: 615] (3722)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-06-04
Categories: Macro
Camera: Canon 1000FN, Canon EF 35-80mm, Ilford FP4, Skylight
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/125 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-06-05 17:08
Viewed: 647
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish]
Where found a sad glance?
I have looked for it by agony pubs,
by narrow hearts,
bas*** illusions and empty hopes.

Where found sad eyes?
Under the pillow of nightmares,
in the salty flavor of my lost tears
or the sweet scent of the vanilla incense.

Where found my done soul pieces?
Inside my dry being,
in the stained blankets of resentment,
in the disturbingly beautiful moon
or the dawn filled with sun.

Where found a sad glance?
In any mirror of my room.

Vanna
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Fantastic photo!
I love the simplicity in this frame.
Great POV!

Cheers,
K.

Hola Fer, hace mucho que no te veia por aca, veo que estas tranbajando impresion. ¿es escaneo de negativo o escaneo de impresion? ¿donde consigues tu pelicula Ilford? Por otro lado muy bien por tu fotopoema, un saludo. :)

La pose y la expresión facial de la chava lo dice todo. Y el que hayas escogido ponerla en blanco y negro le da más dramatismo al evento. Me encantó esta foto. Saludos,

Lorena

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1038 W: 81 N: 66] (12480)
  • [2008-06-07 19:53]

dear Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona,
an interesting image, it is very suggestive...
and I found the name "ICHIKAWA", this MARIA was the lady of Japanese ancestry...
the expression of her is deeply impressive to me.
thank you,
Akihisa

Poem paints a picture, photograph yearns for a poem.
Very nice.

hello Luis,

i like this moody shot and poem.. nice one here. a lovely composition and black and white.. good job.

regards, terry

Hi Luis, I like it. Good work. Soon Mari.

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