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Princess


Princess
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Copyright: Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona (drackness) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 868 W: 60 N: 615] (3722)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-04-21
Categories: Macro
Camera: Canon 1000FN, Canon EF 35-80mm, Ilford HP5 Plus 400, Skylight
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/500 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-06-10 13:32
Viewed: 691
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish]
Let me open a leaf in target
and to begin to write up our history,
as in old woman stories of you foretell
where everything finishes
in laughter and glories…

I want to invent a world yours and mine
where a castle are not dragoons
taking care of;
where the fantasy is reality,
where without faults nor pains
it can kiss to you…

Princess of eyes coffees and brown hair
let me to enter to write
the prettiest leaves that
you have never read…

even perhaps certain that they
have never invented themselves…

And she lets be able rescue you
brandishing my sword with edge
of kisses and hugs;
and to defeat to the time…
that she has to you prisoner
for much in its arms…
And if after all I cannot write
our history nor rescue you
of the time villain,

nor tell you that I love you…
at least dejame to be of
your story the secondary actor…
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Bonsoir Luis,
Un petit portrait qui aurait du attirer ton attention.
Le regard de ton modèle est à la moitié de ton image, un bras est coupé avant d'arriver au coude. Imagine la photo en la prenant avec un regard au tiers supérieur.
Si tu as l'adresse du modèle alors tout va bien pour la refaire..
Cordialement
Laurent

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  • datis Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 113 W: 4 N: 29] (640)
  • [2008-06-10 14:55]

Hi Luis,
very good composition, but it would be an excellent BW shot by increasing a bit contrast.

Regards,
Daryoosh

Hello Luis. This is beautiful portrait shot. Nice soft image in pleasant perspective. The eyes are sharp and beautifully captured. Thanks for sharing and best regards. Jusni

Ola Luis,
Bonito portrait,bom trabalho.
Abracos,
Ralf

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