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Copyright: Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona (drackness) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 868 W: 60 N: 615] (3722)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-07-27
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon D 80, Canon EF 35-80mm
Exposure: f/11, 1/60 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-08-13 23:05
Viewed: 344
Points: 6
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too much light from the left, you have overexposed the skin.
Why did you have chosen f11?
Here it would be enough to have f8 at least.
And do you really use a canon lens with a mount on a nikon body? are you satisfied?

Cheers
Saki

Hi

Nice Portrait of a beautiful model nice warm colors.
Nuce digonal composition.
Khawar

Hi Luis

A Photographer's Note would be nice :)

Nothing wrong with f/11, it's a good choice for studio portraiture.

Lighting isn't great though in my opinion, there are blown-out highlights and strong shadows.

Rew

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  • cokke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 433 W: 109 N: 909] (4359)
  • [2009-11-25 12:16]

Mi estimado vecino, de nuevo por estos lugares despues de algun tiempo fuera de treklens, pues veo que la calidad de trabajo que presentas ah repuntado satisfactoriamente, me da gusto ver el progreso y el buen material que publicas.

De la foto puedo decir, salvo los detalles del ciclorama, esta bien hecha, un poco sobrexpuesta, pero bien lograda la idea.

Vecino, un abrazo y seguimos on line !!!

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