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Here the world is transformed


Here the world is transformed
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Copyright: Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona (drackness) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 868 W: 60 N: 615] (3722)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-07-20
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon D 80, AF-S NIKKOR 18-135mm 1:3,5-5,6G ED
Exposure: f/11, 1/60 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-07-27 10:34
Viewed: 392
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish]
Here the world is transformed,
with two bodies in the bed,
bathed at night
that it enters by the window…
Here the life begins,
to see your eyes,
when kissing your whole skin,
when the feeling your red lips…
And me burning fire the heat of your skin…
and I never wanna lost you…
I need to know close,
that these in order to be able,
to live…
And it hurts to me
to think that you leave me,
finishing the night you will not be…
and the world that
a minute ago we created feels,
to collapse…
And here the world is transformed…
with two shades taking leave
bathed by the cold
that it leaves to his step the night…
And here the life is transformed,
with your lips in mine…
with your hands in my neck…
and your breath on mine…
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Hi Luis,

you model is pretty. nice skin tone. I liked your presentation. thanks for sharing it.

Regards,
sanjib

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  • mark25 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 359 W: 9 N: 742] (4599)
  • [2009-07-27 12:03]

very sensual :) i love the moody lighting along with her expression :)

great stuff :)

muhammad muhsin

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  • ChuFer Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 139 W: 15 N: 0] (2334)
  • [2009-07-27 12:11]

Ese rojo de peligro...tan acertado...original saludos

I like the lighting - the strong red and blue - and the glowing highlights created on shoulder, collarbone and breast. Her eye contact is confident.

The presentation including the bra and opened jeans supports the theme of your note - deliberately sexual.

Might have been a good idea just to snip off that hanging thread from her bra though.

Rew

Luis, great presentation and lighting of a very pretty model. Sensual and appealing, whatever type lighting props you used. Your poem was very appropos of the subject. After translation it got even better. Please check out my workshop posting. I couldn't resist such a beautiful lady.

JoeGoff, Louisville, KY

Hi Luis,
Very beautiful portrait vith very nice model.Good pose.TFS.
Regards,

hAyAti

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  • Pedros Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 280 W: 72 N: 283] (5717)
  • [2009-07-28 12:25]

hi, red light god composition is model - good shot

La mirada y pose de la chica, la temperatura del color ambiente contra el blanco de su sosten, sus labios humedos y sensuales, su piel firme y joven, las formas simples de alrededor, bastante llamativa la imagen sin dudar. El color rojizo no me agrada pero la imagen es bastante sensual, definida, atractiva... bien, muy bien. :)

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