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Lashes:mark of the window of the soul


Lashes:mark of the window of the soul
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Copyright: Ninfa Urania (Ninfa_Urania) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 130 W: 30 N: 114] (867)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-01-19
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Sony DSC P32
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-01-21 22:51
Viewed: 1870
Points: 21
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
ME MIRASTE TÚ

Me miraste tú, y la luz
se volvió toda de plata.
Y cantaron los rosales
con sus rosas de olor suave
y sus corolas tan pálidas…

Me miraste tú, y el sol
se convirtió en catarata
de pedrería y de fuego.
Mi garganta se abrasaba…,
y no te supe decir
lo que decirte anhelaba.

Me miraste tú, y el cielo
color de turquesa estaba.
Y sentí la inmensidad
entre las alas del alma,
abriéndose a mi vivir.

¡Luz, rosales, cielo, sol!
Inmensidad en tu mirada.

¡Pedrería, fuego, azul!

Contigo, ¡la Nada es Todo!
Y todo sin ti, no es nada…

"Flor de Lis"

Process:
Cut of the image, Resize, Effect Render Flashlight
Unsharp Mask
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Beautiful eye and definitely lovely, long eye lashes. Great portrait. I like the "looking straight into the camera".... Great job...:O)

  • Good 
  • wayne Gold Star Critiquer [C: 292 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-01-22 1:19]

sexy eyes. this is always a good subject matter. i would have just gone with USM

Nice eye indeed, I like the sort of soft glow but I agree with Wayne, a tiny bit of sharpening would have made the effect a bit stronger. I like the extra PP effects used. Good posting! Richard

bonjour ninfa
regard de velours, oeil perçant, bien cadre. Un seul petit défaut le reflet blanc.
JP

Very nice work! TFS!

Hi Ninfa, amazing lashes round an appealing eye.
great picture. great work
bye alex

  • Great 
  • Fisher Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1254 W: 351 N: 944] (5728)
  • [2005-01-22 16:26]

Well done on the capture. Would have prefered the side view, however nice one and nice color to your eye. Well done.

Mike

  • Great 
  • padre Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1419 W: 90 N: 263] (4035)
  • [2005-01-23 7:58]

Very good Nina, pretty eyes!

hola ninfa pero creo que es tu sexta foto de ojos y creo que esta si esta mas mejor y bonitos ojos

  • Great 
  • SILVA Gold Star Critiquer [C: 321 W: 0 N: 0] (3917)
  • [2005-04-08 14:17]

k bonita fotografia,k bello lo poema..te decobri aki..otra vez-saludos desde Portugal.

sexy eye , nice shot and particular light point of grey make so mysteriuos . nice. ciao
denis

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