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Focus
Photo Information
Copyright: Francisco LM (Klarth) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 43 W: 0 N: 9] (230)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-07-26
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/1.4, 1/100 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Billiard pictures [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-08-03 17:20
Viewed: 475
Points: 4
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To rgagnon: Hi!Klarth 4 08-05 20:23
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very strong photo
her position and looks is carefully
nice shut i like it

hello Francisco
This your best dhot in your portfolio (in my point of view of course)

the intensity is there but the composition could have been different... There is nothing interesting on the right hand side and the focus of her eyes brings us to the ball (that we dont see) so, my suggestion is to swithc to portrait format, crop the right hand side and sho the ball to be hit at the far bottom of the pic... what woukd you think of that?

cheers
Richard

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