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The Generals and Me


The Generals and Me
Photo Information
Copyright: Lisan Jutras (tongapup) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 40 W: 1 N: 6] (125)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-02-22
Categories: Portrait
Camera: FujiFilm FinePix S7000
Exposure: f/4, 1/210 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-04-09 22:09
Viewed: 1233
Points: 15
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I took this at a teachers' supplies shop.
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Très original, J'aime bien la composition de cette photo. Bien sur tu rehausse le tout. Bravo.

Michel

Hi Lisan,
Nice and funny composition !
Interesting especially because you integrated yourself in the shot in a very original way ...
I like it.
Sylvie

haha very nice
post it on TE will you???
so that people at least realise that you're a woman ( with a general's face)
by far one of your most intelligent photographs..
take care :)

p.s. hey how small is your camera???
it seems like you have your hands on your face :) and try to loosen up a little will you?? while taking the photographs..
you remind me of spy vs spy :)
ok enough of pulling your leg
i've gotto go back to te

Very interesting shot 'pup. I like the composition alot. I do wish though that there wasn't that glare on the far left general (perhaps if you had someone standing there?--like a kid looking at you funny?), and (and this one is a prob inherent with the prosumer style digicams) I wish there were less DoF, there's just too much going on in the frame... or you could just reposition the frame: move yourself off centre and zoom in a bit closer to get rid of distracting elements. I did a WS, tell me what you think.

Interesting though and I appreciate that. I've gotta give you credit for the effort you're putting into improving. Your shots are definately getting better. Keep it up!

I love this shot of yours, Lisan! it says a lot about your sense of humour, your intelligence... hey, are you planning to visit South America again?

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  • goc Gold Star Critiquer [C: 321 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-05-04 10:51]

very nice belly ... :-) umph , i mean photo
funny and good

Ah! The guys in TE who were thinking you were a man, haven't seen your legs yet for sure. So, it seems you're not a pasta/pizza/burger/poutine addict. Are you on vegetables?

original and strange pic. like the view of only legs. ciao

den

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