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On My Shoulder II


On My Shoulder II
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Copyright: Maria Lorena Coindreau (Regiomontana) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 415 W: 1 N: 294] (2736)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-06-21
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-06-22 20:20
Viewed: 282
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
In the previous one, her hand was on the frame, because I want to give importance to the butterfly on her shoulder and not to my grandchild face, but I guess I can do both. The drop under her eye is water from the swimming pool, not a tear, even she does not look too happy. Any of your critiques will be of help to me.

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To rewshearer: I appreciate your help.Regiomontana 1 06-24 18:54
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Beautiful eyes!
A shame perhaps about the bright objects in the background, they compete with the shirt and butterfly, but that doesn't really take away from the nice shot you have delivered here.

Rew

cia Maria Lorena
this directly sight.. makes your capture more precious than the last one!.. ;))
excellent.. i really love it! thanks
ciao Marco

Hola Lorena,
Oh dear I did not even see the butterfly as I was mesmerized by this beautiful crying angel. what a sweetheart, here eyes are mesmerizing. a superb portrait. beat regards...
danilo

hello Maria
beautiful shot
great expression and fine colors
great shot captured
i like the both (yesterdays and today's) wonderful work

regards
MAnuj MEhta

Hello Maria,
Beautiful dual portraits.. and very meautiful eyes. I liked well timed shot and eye catching facial expression
TFS
Selahattin E

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  • foozi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 592 W: 0 N: 957] (4596)
  • [2009-06-25 0:40]

Hi Maria,
a lovely capture of the subjects. I like the child face more that the butterfly. Thr combination of both is really very exciting and complementary.
Well capture in excellent clarity and sharpness.

regards,
Foozi

Bonjour Lorea
I Think that if you wanted to focus on the butterfly, it is a loss.Everybpdy focuses on the eyes of your granddaughter.But the shot is quite good and the butterfly doen't waste the pleasure
Hasta la Vista

Two beauties.....to natural state.....
Great Lorena.....
Bravo
Claude

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1717 W: 16 N: 840] (15139)
  • [2009-08-20 21:14]

This little sweetie has the most incredible eyes!!! She's beautiful (must take after grandma :) Lovely detail and colors. TFS

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