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The Chicago Marina


The Chicago Marina
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Copyright: Ronald Quillopas (dackswaffo) (37)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-10-16
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon EOS 40D, - Canon EF-S 18-55mm 1:3.5-5.6 IS
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/800 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-10-17 11:00
Viewed: 83
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Had the chance to photograph the beautiful Chicago Marina yesterday (Oct. 16, 2009). Photoshop was used to edit the picture.
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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 516 W: 132 N: 972] (7106)
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Hi Ronald,
this looks like a busy Marina.I'm not sure what effect you were after, I guess a more painterly effect than that of a photograph would give? Could you post the original as a WS so we can view the differences? There is one area I think you could improve on.The lighter colored section to the left, near the pirate flag, appears out of place,I find it a distraction.
TFS
Ron

Hi Ronald!

A true mid-west photo! Thanks for sharing this. I like this photo. The sky is very interesting. I'm a beginner, so mostly I know what I like, but can't articulate why. It is a busy photo, but what marina isn't? I like what I describe as different levels of subjects, i.g. the water, boats, trees and finally the sky.

TFS
Dennis

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