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My First!


My First!
Photo Information
Copyright: Dennis Wright (walk33a) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 272 W: 6 N: 397] (2055)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-06-19
Categories: Nature, Artwork
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-09-29 3:59
Viewed: 147
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I do not have a macro lens, but I zoomed in on the subject as well as I could. I was so resistant to composing a "flower with a bug on it" photo. But I found one in my archives and really enjoyed my time in pp. It can't compare to all the amazing flower photos on TL, but overall I like. I'll do another, not tomorrow; Jack would never talk to me again if I posted two of them in a row.

I hope you like it.

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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To ErikSven: flower with a bug on itwalk33a 1 10-29 17:16
To chendis: Oana gave me a point!!! I'll have a great daywalk33a 9 09-29 17:50
To solrac: flor con un insectowalk33a 1 09-29 14:08
To werdir: focuswalk33a 2 09-29 07:25
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Hi Dennis :)
don't shoot me :)))
the colors are grate
you did grate job withe the frame too
but the focus is not
you have a good camera and you don t need to zoom it for a macro
i think a f/2.8 was grate for this
i think someone that knows better can help you
keep trying !!!
Oana

Hi Dennis,

Bees are a real challenge, because they flit around from flower to flower quite rapidly. I've managed to get a few OK shots, but nothing that I'd write home about. You should try to use a fast shutter speed on your next attempt, but the problem here seems to be focus/DOF.

Your pp work looks good here!

Best regards,
Werner

Buena presentacion y nitidez ,asi como el insecto que contrasta genialmente con el color de las flores
Buen trabajo
un saludo

Aaargh! ;o))) You did it! A flower photo!
Hmmm, the spirit is willing but the flesh is weak. Happens to everyone - even to me ;o).
Cheers!
Erik

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