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Baby Falls


Baby Falls
Photo Information
Copyright: Dennis Wright (walk33a) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 189 W: 6 N: 212] (1274)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-10-01
Categories: Nature, Artwork, Experimental
Exposure: f/4, 1/40 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-10-03 2:02
Viewed: 137
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Let me clarify that this is my art form of photography. I feel Treklens is the site to introduce a new look. The raw was sharp. It now looks as I intended it to look. Not many artist are accepted in their own time, and I don't expect many to like it, but possibly you can appreciate the effort and artistic expression, and maybe not.

This is a baby fall created in a Green House in Indianapolis. The plants are amazing in this facility. I captured this shot and reduced the noise to yield a more contemporary look. I added a rough-edged frame and a color frame. I really hope you like it.

A raw version has been place in the workshop.

Thanks again for all your help!

Dennis
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Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To john1: compositionwalk33a 1 10-04 13:47
To werdir: artworkwalk33a 3 10-04 07:09
To solrac: artworkwalk33a 1 10-04 05:26
To brunorsantana: interesting effectwalk33a 1 10-03 14:50
To hay_kes: differentwalk33a 1 10-03 14:48
To roges: Differentwalk33a 1 10-03 04:27
To chendis: Contemporary lookwalk33a 2 10-03 02:58
To chendis: Clarificationwalk33a 1 10-03 02:46
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  • chendis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 511 W: 193 N: 704] (4962)
  • [2009-10-03 2:22]
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hi Dennis
how are you?
nice tones of green
imho i think you reduce the noise too much , ah you wanted a contemporary look....but this looks like out of focus u see
i think the clarity was good just you needed other settings what about a vignette effect or converted in sepia
Have a grate weekend!
Oana

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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 498 W: 0 N: 908] (4593)
  • [2009-10-03 4:08]
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Hi Dennis,
A splendid image. Beautiful colors and interesting play. A clever idea of presenting these mini waterfalls, congratulations.
Have a good weekend,
Adrian

Hi Dennis,

I like the effect you achieved here. The shutter speed you chose works well to soften the water's movement. It's hard to judge without knowing what the original looked like, but I think this may have worked better with more sharpness. Only my opinion, but that's what we're on TL for.

Have a great weekend!

Best regards,
Werner

Hi Denneis,
Very interesting image vith excellent colours and compo.TFS.
Cheers,

hAyAti

Nice composition and very interesting effect, Dennis.
Well done job, my friend. Thanks for sharing!

Greetings from Brazil,
Bruno

Buena presentacion de esta pequeña catarata tan llena de color
Buen trabajo
un saludo

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  • john1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 172 W: 0 N: 181] (1461)
  • [2009-10-04 13:26]
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Hi Denis,

Excuse the delay, but I think your composition becomes more and more interresting.
The effects here are really great and very nice presentation.
Good evening.
john

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