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Delicate Dawning


Delicate Dawning
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Copyright: Darren Underwood (punwit) (150)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-05-31
Categories: Mood
Camera: Sony Cybershot DSC-H5
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/20 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-07-27 4:36
Viewed: 284
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This lengthy portrait presentation is a bit of a departure for me as I normally wouldn't feature that much sky in relation to land but the inclusion of the moon seemed appropriate here. I'm particularly fond of the void in the clouds that is directly above the tree and fairly mimics the shape of the tree.
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To Tezza: Thanks for the thoughtful commentspunwit 3 07-31 16:04
To mohaiminawang: Thankspunwit 1 07-31 15:59
To rewshearer: Thankspunwit 1 07-31 15:37
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  • Tezza Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 174 W: 95 N: 264] (2711)
  • [2008-07-27 6:08]
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I can see your dilemma about the height of the pic to allow the moon to be seen - it does add interest to this beautiful scene. But the photo seems slightly ungainly to me and the cost of including the moon is too great. Do you have the PP skills to move the moon down to somewhere above the "void" (which I agree is interesting)then crop? I don't - not yet anyway.

Hi Darren,

That make you post so special.its create an imppresion that the tree and moon connected by the cloud and has to be far.Great composition.

regards
mohaimin

I love this one. Beautifully composed, with good metering - the silhouette vs. the pastel colours of works well. The moon is a great touch.
You have talent, it would be nice to see you critique more members here. Best way to draw attention to your own shots, too, by the way.
Rew

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