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American Apartment


American Apartment
Photo Information
Copyright: James Olsson (photobones) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 60 W: 14 N: 7] (262)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-07-15
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture, Abstract
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-02-13 22:25
Viewed: 567
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Building in St. Louis.
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Nice texture. I don't like the frame. And the green window is too much centered in the x axle... and it could be straighter.

Hi James!
I find your photo very interesting and creative.
I like this kind of composition, repetative object works fine, especialy with colored window.

I just think you could flatten out lines.
Try perspective tools in Photosop.
Regards.

I like the repetition and vertigo inducing lines. Very nice composition here.

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