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My first Bee~~~~


My first Bee~~~~
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Copyright: Vandana Bajikar (vandana2923) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2465 W: 125 N: 5702] (22207)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-05-27
Categories: Nature, Macro
Camera: Nikon D80, Nikkor 18-200 f/3.5-5.6G ED-IF AFS DX VR, UV
Exposure: f/8, 1/160 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Cool bugs!! [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-05-29 17:27
Viewed: 750
Points: 94
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note

Hello TL friends.

Was trying to find out the wonders D80 can do. My first Bumble Bee shot.

This Sunday of Memorial day long weekend, went to Missouri Botanical Garden.

Yes, was scared between all those bees there, but sitting very quite and steady, so that they won't attack me and sting. I clicked few of their photos.

So with this shot starting to upload the photos from Missouri Botanical Garden.

Hope you'll enjoy! Thanks, Vandana

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If you can imagine it you can achieve it. If you can dream it, you can become it. --William Arthur Ward


PS: There is another shot of the bee in WS.

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Hi Vandana, Your photos do that my sight is glad on having seen them, big captures, with excellent colouring contrasts. Really god Job

Hello Vandana,
Should I say well done for being so brave! Well, it was worth it! You have captured a fine shot of a bee and a flower!
Kind regardsm,
Bev :-)

Hi Vandana, normal honey bees I can get easily, the bumble bees here do not sit still for long enough. Bumble bees are usually not at all interested in stinging like the normal bee is just take your time and move carefully among them. An excellent shot, good colour and nice detail. TFS,
David

Hello Vandana.
Very nice macro,good composition,colours and well framed.
Congratulation for your new TOY-D80
Best Regards
TFS

* Piotr *

Hi Vandana,
Very sharp bee, glad your were careful with them. good composition.
Regards,
Iris

Hello Vandy and congratulations
Good to see you back alife out of yhr B**Garden and not eaten alife by the bee's. Very good close up with your new Nikon 80.
A job welldone. TFS
John

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  • BenF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 299 W: 0 N: 341] (3049)
  • [2007-05-30 0:03]

Hi Vandana,
Good macro shot, nice 'n sharp.
It seems like you really enjoy the D80.
Well done,
BEn

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  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2639 W: 1 N: 1262] (15433)
  • [2007-05-30 3:43]

Hola Vandana,
preciosa macro,
bella composición...
excelente presentación y buen popv.
saludos

Little overcast(light) but a good shot we may expect from a Nikon D80 :-) TFS
Joos

Excellent capture. Excelent sharpness, DOF and details.
Seems that camera works for you :-).
TFS
Pierre

Congradulations Vandana, on you first bee shot:)
And cheers on your new camera!
Great colors, sharpness and dof...
Excellent post
TFS
david
:)

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2847 W: 263 N: 5947] (23588)
  • [2007-05-30 9:22]

Superb details and a perfect composition.
I am not sure that I would dare to get quite that close!
TFS
silke

Hola Vandana.
Preciosos detalles y buena iluminación.
Acertado encuadre y fabulosa presentación.
Un saludo y tfs, JL.

Best to not get too close to these! Their stings are like getting hit with a baseball bat! Nice shot, could be a little sharper...aahhh but with time, you will be 100 closer to him with no fear! Bees won't sting you if you are relaxed..and even then...unless you are aggressive, they will leave you alone!
nice shot Vandana!
Linda
B-)

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  • edal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 599 W: 71 N: 645] (4306)
  • [2007-05-30 10:22]

Hi Vandana!
You have to be proud not only with your camera, but by your good skill - I know bumble bees are difficult (as busy as bees:-) but your capture is veeery good, for sure. Your ws is from a slightly better pov, I think.
Anton

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  • logios Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 112 W: 28 N: 279] (1864)
  • [2007-05-30 11:21]

Hi Vandana

Excellent your work with Bumble Bee. Very sharp , with vivid colors. Well done.
Best regards
Yannis

Hi Vandana,
Excellent composition.Very beautiful bee and flowers.well done.TFS.
Greetings.
H.Ayhan

Hi Vandana, lovely busy bee with wonderful flowers, great colors, very well done, ciao Silvio

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  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1312 W: 47 N: 2913] (16744)
  • [2007-05-30 21:38]

Hello Vandana:)
Nice and sharp. And yes bee as always working hard hehe.
Good exposure and details.
TFS
Tom
:)

hello! this is beautiful! excellent colours! and excellent moment to shot! great macro!TFS
Greetings Aga:)

Hello Vandana,
Those guys are difficult since they move so fast! You do well here, both flower and insect come with pleasant sharpness in the focal area...
What is possible to improve is the pose of the insect, more streched out! Since they don't take directions well, it is all about shooting again and again and again!
Greetings,
Pablo -

Hello Vandana,

Excllent capture of this wonderful capture bee, the colors of the flower and the bee is so true, with excllent composure perfcet detail svery crisp I really like this POV alot wll done

TFS Kyle

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  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2498 W: 56 N: 3862] (17484)
  • [2007-05-31 11:54]

Hello Vandana,
Another view..A lovely reception of nature with good colors and contrast. Good lightly and detail. Very good composition and a very interesting picture with flowers and insects.
Best wishes.
Janusz

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  • Viking Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 996 W: 63 N: 782] (4383)
  • [2007-05-31 12:23]

Bzzzzzzzzzzzz Bzzzzzzzzzzz I hate them but photo is ok.
Good sharpness Vanny
Rob

Hello Vandan, Congratulations on your first bee shot. It is a success. Well framed with good colors and sharpness. BEst regards, Danilo

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  • thor68 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 412 W: 117 N: 762] (4536)
  • [2007-05-31 14:09]

buzz, buzz, buzz goes the bumble-bee...*g*
great close-up, well composed with the nice bb. hanging on to the pretty flower,
sharpness could be a tiny bit better, but for
a first try it´s very good - next stop macro-lens? *g* that´s even more fun and closer.
if the object is not moving too fast, you can even try f/11 or f/16 for a greater DOF
and maybe use a flash (if you didn´t).
looking forward to your next tries & take care, thor.

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  • deains Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 189 W: 33 N: 1172] (5039)
  • [2007-05-31 14:45]

Just another great photo from you, well done! Frame is great Don

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  • sleger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 564 W: 57 N: 181] (3549)
  • [2007-05-31 15:52]

Hello Vandana

This is a busy bee working on your favorite subject, a flower. Nice colours and sharpness.

TFS

Regards, Sylvain

Hi Vandana,
This bee is different from the ones I'm used to seeing...its legs look like metal, or plastic!
Wonderful photos, perfect sharpness, detail and colors.
TFS
Regards,
Lurdes

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  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1666 W: 136 N: 1263] (6138)
  • [2007-05-31 19:46]

Hi Vandana,
Very good macro.
Lovely the details and the sharpness is very good.
Very well composed, the colors and framing is wonderful.
TFS..Sky

Very attractive shot. Very good point of view. I like the colours and details on your picture.
Best wishes,
Achim

Hello Vandana,

Very nice macro and composition. Fine detail and color, well done!

Malik & Mary.

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1372 W: 0 N: 1] (12003)
  • [2007-06-01 5:43]

Good macro Vandana.
very creative picture.
Gr Jos
P**

Good morning Vandana

Congratualtions on your first Bee capture and the new camera certainly seems to be doing its stuff. Lovely work he looks all cuddly and fluffy.

TFS regards Helen

Hello Vandana,

That beauty, I wait that this his first bee swallows you plenty prosperity and a lot of honey for you. Great capture and beautiful visual! Beautiful colors here.
Congratulations

Sérgio

Hi Vandana,

Nice DOF and POV !
and the colors are great

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  • krzesz Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 725 W: 5 N: 15] (5455)
  • [2007-06-01 10:59]

hi Vandana!!
Very beautiful moment to this photo!!
Fntastic capture!!
I like this composition and realization!!
Thanks..
m..

Hello Vandana,

A very beutiful job, with wonderful colors.
Congratulations!
TFS
Sergio

Funny note, Vandana! Just yesterday, Christan and I went out to shoot when she found swarming bees on a signpost. Didn't want to get too close for a shot .......
This is a very good macro, you should be pleased with your new cam!
Cheers
Otto

Hi dear Vandana,
Everything OK with your new budy D80? My D70s say helo to you everything alright with him. (unfortunately it's not a 'her';) Anyway, gprgeous capture of this flower and the bee, I consider you know the story of these twon :) Well, fine colours and great sharpness, together with the frame a superb posting.
TFS
Hans

Hello Vandana,
A beautiful first shot, it's enormous this bee. I like much his spread right wing.
Beautiful colors that that is for the bee that for the macro one of the flowers. Beautiful work and great DOF with your new camera D80.
Heartily, Corinne

Hi Vandana ;o)
It's a success ! You managed well with your new camera :o) Wonderful macro of your first bee ;o) Purple, yellow and green ... hum splendid. Lovely frame too, TFS
Regards, Marylou

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  • twin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 423 W: 126 N: 200] (7348)
  • [2007-06-03 4:51]

hi Vandana,
very nice close up, beautiful details...
wonderful colors, great composition...
very well done...

I tried to do something similar the other day but kept missing bees on the flowers. Lucky capture. :)

Anjhello Scoring System:
DOF - 3 POV - 3 CREATIVITY - 3 COMPOSITION - 3
LIGHTING - 3 SHARPNESS - 2 COLORS - 3

Average: 2.86

Range:
1 point: Average < 1.99
2 points: Average > 2.00

Scoring System:
1 Good 2 Better 3 Best

tfs!

WOW! Congrats on your first bee pic it is absolutely stunning. Great details and wonderful colors. TFS
Christan

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  • Maite Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 225 W: 3 N: 205] (1317)
  • [2007-06-06 17:12]

Wow! You did a marvellous first Bumblebee shot!
What a beautiful composition and excellent sharpness, DOF, colors and composition!
Congratulations and TFS
Greetings
Maite

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