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• rychousmama (228)
• [2007-01-24 21:17]

Welcome to TL Nagi! Really cool concept for a photo and I like the idea of the series. The detail is excellent and the photo is very sharp. I like the out-of-focus background of the jeans for your hand to pop out, but I am not too crazy about the edge of the sleeve at the bottom as it runs straight across the bottom and doesn't have much depth or light hitting it: there's no form to it, thus it distracts from your hand. I would recommend maybe taking the shot from just slightly farther back, without the sleeve, which I think would help. Otherwise great and good with the dark corner at the top left. Thanks for sharing and I hope to see more of your work!
-Lara

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• cradlek (76)
• [2007-01-25 3:59]

hi..
i like the focus on the ring..
this is good photo i think..
maciek