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Copyright: Larry Williams (lrw1966) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 578 W: 0 N: 1006] (3458)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-06-21
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Macro
Exposure: f/4, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-06-29 7:27
Viewed: 277
Points: 58
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
...."Dinner"..&.."90 Days"....

I have studied this image for hours and have
many times almost discarded it. As you can
see his right wing has been damaged and is
not perfect. I have finally decided nature is
not always perfect but is real. My intention
is -- was to capture the beauty of nature even if
nature is not perfect.

His right wing caused no difficulty with flying
and as you can see, it did not effect his appetite.
**********
Observations after "90 Days" and 45 images
presented:

I feel like I am attending the "University of Photography
as Art" and taking a Master's Course in "Treklens".

I am a self taught photographer, yet everyday on
"Treklens" the talents of many photographic
artist are available for me to study and learn from.

I believe that I am creative within and that I
sometimes see things others look at and do not
see. Yet I do not know where this creative ability
is taking me or how I am going to get there. I find
this frustrating and exciting at the same time.

My goal is to add to the sum of beauty on earth --
with all of your help on "Treklens" I will move toward
that goal everyday. Thanks to all. Larry
**********
Thanks to everyone for looking in.
Larry

Original, sized, sharpened and framed for TL
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Hello Larry


Beautiful macro shot
I am amazed with the beauty, the colors and light here!
excellent look of this butterfly with all the details
of your wing, and this blurry Bg it defines well her.
Congratulations, great compo!

Sérgio

Hi Larry,
This is a might impressive macro. The butterfly is attractive, and the yellow zinnia is a colorful flower to highlight the butterfly's semi-folded wings. You should be very proud of this. Greetings! Danilo

Nobody is perfect, so should we only photograph what the world things is perfect? I think many people on here might have tried to PhotoShop the "imperfectness" from the wing, which makes what we ultimately see different from what was actually there. I want to see what you saw, and this does that. Glad you decided not to discard.
Tracy

Hello Lary,
Beautiful butterfly close up.Vivid colors,POV,details,sharpness and composition are perfect.
Best regards
Siggi

Hi Larry,
This is a very nice picture of this imperfect butterfly. The vivid colors stand out and the detail in both wings are nice. I like that you posted this shot. Even the less than perfect can still be beautiful. Nice work Larry.
Regards,
Kevin

A very nice note, and so true that there is beauty all around us, yet not always perfect. I like this unique butterfly! Very pretty color. TFS

Hi Larry
Stunning capture. Amazing colours and details.
Congrats!Thanks for the note.Keep on going...
Friendly greetings
J.Diogo

good macro shot, nice compo with good POV and framing, good close shot
regards
jo

howdy larry.
just in from work.
i have been thinking about what you were going to post after reading your email this morning.
you have not disappointed.
a striking macro of this delicate butterfly.

i read your note with interest as i,to, am self taught(and still learning)

have a great week.
your friend,
Brian/Trampas

Bonjour Larry,
Joli cliché de ce superbe papillon butinant cette jolie fleur, les deux forment une agréable symbiose!
C'est du beau travail!!
Amicalement Odile

Hi Larry
the handicapped butterfly is still beautiful.
great colors and perfect clarity of details.
beautiful colors.
nice presentation.
tsilla

Hello Larry!
Great colours and light in your picture and very nice point of view!
Best regards!
Lili

Hi Larry...great composition with wonderful details and sharpness.

Roger

Just an excellent macro my friend,
you did very well,
great light, superb compo, beautiful colours,
welldone and tfs,
regards,
Taner

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2015 W: 136 N: 3063] (16565)
  • [2008-06-30 0:39]
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Hi Larry,

I like the colours here, so vibrant and bright, great contrast and dof, a very beautiful macro shot of the butterfly, great details here. :D

Have a nice day,

Cheers,
Sweety

:) ltr

Hello Larry. Your macro is getting much better. The quality of the image is top class with stunning perch and brilliant clarity. I like the pleasantly silenced background and good framing. Well done and best regards. Jusni
:-)

Hi Larry,
What a lovely composition, good DOF, and lovely colours and detail.

I have to agree with you about Treklens being like attending a University of Photography as I have learnt so much since being on here.
TFS
Jane

Hi Larry

A superb macro of the butterfly atop the flower, with perfect sharpness & dof, with splendid saturated colour. Tfs!

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  • tyro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 212 W: 83 N: 639] (2868)
  • [2008-06-30 6:27]
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Hello, Larry.

Stunning!

A wonderful shot, perfectly exposed, sharp as a pin and with fabulous colours.

Very well done indeed!

Best Wishes,

John.

P.S. A very interesting note which, I must say, reflects my feelings exactly - we're all learning all of the time. And I believe that these sites and the people on them really help us to develop our photographic skills and also, perhaps more importantly, help us all to open our eyes to the beauty of the World around us.

hi Larry

Even though broken wings but this butterfly is very well captured in sharp and colorful details. You have really composed very well with this angle.

tfs, bill

merhaba my friend larry
excellent macro lovely butterfly and excellent lovely colours.well done.
friendly greetings from Istanbul.
gürkan akçakır.

This is beautiful Larry. Excellent in all aspects. Such great work.
Cheers,
Dennis

Hello Larry,

if only the head is sharper.. when i first posted butterfly shot that was the comment i got.. i thought that time i got it right i was wrong.. your butterfly will be a perfect shot if the head is clear too.. but im sure in time you will get it right :)

i like your butterfly with broken wings.. that's normal in the butterfly kingdom and circle of their life.. so no worry.. good thing you did not discarded this shot.. its a beautiful colourful butterfly perched on a beautiful yellow flower.. excellent composition and colours.. good job..

regards, terry

Hi Larry,
This is awesome,i like the quality of colors and light here.Nice blurred BG too..
Good shot Larry..

CM

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  • Koala Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 354 W: 21 N: 71] (2248)
  • [2008-07-02 1:25]
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Hello Larry!
Beautiful macro shot!
Everything is so clear and the colors looks great!
Beautiful is the subject too!

Have a nice day!

Alexandra

Hi Larry
This is a very good shot. It is sharp with good detail and colour. Good composition and depth of field.
vey well done.
Mike

Hey Larry
You have made a GREAT SHOT OF THIS BUTERFLY ON THIS LOVELY YELOW FLOWER
bRAVO
cHEERS,bRACA

Great vibrant colors on this one too Larry.
Here i really liek the background green blur.
The contrasting orange and yellow are smashing.
Well done again.
- Vincent

hi Larry, you did well not discarding it, it is an excellent composition with great sharpness and colors.

rgds
Allen

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3342 W: 681 N: 1922] (16089)
  • [2008-07-03 23:13]
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What a feast for the eye !

thanks,
v

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