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alley
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Copyright: Ryan Arhart (igjoe) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 10 W: 1 N: 3] (102)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-04-15
Camera: Canon Digital Rebel, Sigma 28-70mm/3.5-4.5, Digital JPEG
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-04-16 3:05
Viewed: 779
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I was just walking on campus and saw this little plant trying to grow in the alley. Just wondering what you guys think of it. thanks
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To Sutavugu: thanksigjoe 1 04-16 14:35
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Hi Ryan,
I like the idea. The colors are also nice. But I think it would be better if you placed the plant a little right side, may be in the center. Thus, the shing wall at left would be seen in much volume. There would be three parts of wall in defferent colors but more or less in the same volume. And the dark part at the right wouldnt be seen.. Such a composition would be better (my opinion).
Anyway, nice shot..

What a cool point of view! I like the different tonal values you have shown here as well!

Very interesting...

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