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clothesline
Photo Information
Copyright: Jeff Sandquist (atarisphoto) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 249 W: 4 N: 102] (960)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-07-13
Categories: Daily Life, Event, Decisive Moment
Camera: NIKON D 70, Nikkor AF 18-70 mm, B+W UV
Exposure: f/8, 1/1000 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-08-17 16:27
Viewed: 493
Points: 19
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another shot from my North Dakota trip. This was a clothesline I found out back of an old abandoned farmsted. It appears to have been made from the frame of an old car as far as I could tell. I thought it was pretty unique looking and a great use of old parts. I think it was the simplicity of the lines created by the support, wire, and tall prairie grass that caught my eye.

Added black frame in PS7.
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  • Great 
  • hester Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1320 W: 31 N: 1634] (9994)
  • [2006-08-17 16:34]

I like this composition with the twisted metal against the green grass. Interesting POV

there is a lot in here..i feel if the grass was taken out..the big one and the horizon levelled
and a bit more detail on the top...some zap..
and you would have a perfect trek lens entry..
the problem with the grass is it bisects the line and gives a bit of a tension as to where the eye should go
cheers
geof

well spotted subject !

It's not every day you see a clothesline fashioned from old truck parts and wire... nice work, I too like the simple lines and shapes.

hi jeff,
nice lines and curves in the photo,
I realy like the color combionations,
great crop!
tfs
stefaan

Hi Jeff,
Great composition with a perfect low POV. I agree with Geof on all his points. I do like the great colors and the lighting in this photo.
TFS,
Niek

i like the composition jeff :)
love the contrast of the metal against the grass
good colors and exposure here

i think its would look great too if you tilt the camera to get more of the metal into the frame :)

k

love the picture, greate colours and the composition:)
TFS!

Tramwaj29

  • Great 
  • fryz Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 36 W: 1 N: 11] (178)
  • [2006-10-13 6:21]

j'aime bien cette photo artistique
a+ Jeff and thank's for your comment
fryz

Beautiful, it reminds me the art of Pink Floyd on "The Division Bell" album.
Good contrast, light and composition ;)

Jules

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