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The arrival of spring


The arrival of spring
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Copyright: kapil jadhav (kapil) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 102 W: 45 N: 67] (500)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-04-09
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon PowerShot S2 IS
Exposure: f/4, 1/800 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-04-10 12:39
Viewed: 349
Points: 1
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The Spring has arrived and everywhere the white color has been replaced by green. I took this picture yesterday.
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Hi Kapil,
I liked the concept of this shot. You wanted the road as a metaphor for the arrival of spring, right? I think you deserve a point for conceptualising that.
However, imho your execution can be improved. I've done a workshop for you with some changes:
- unless you intended it, the scene is not level. I know that there's no horizon in the scene BUT there're trees. And trees normally grow upright. So straighten your shot with that as a guide!
- the sweeping road's very nice but better if it cut diagonally across the frame. And by straightening your shot, you get a diagonal run of the road up the hill as a bonus.
Hope this helps. Let me know what you think.

may the good light be with you,
kc

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