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Train Stop


Train Stop
Photo Information
Copyright: Robert Daveant (bobdaveant) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 18 W: 0 N: 3] (300)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-02-08
Categories: Transportation
Camera: HP Photosmart 935
Exposure: f/3.9, 30 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Railway Lines [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-11-13 14:42
Viewed: 674
Favorites: 3 [view]
Points: 27
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A foggy morning in Cleveland Ohio USA. Taken with a poin and shoot HP Photosmart 935 non-DSLR camera.
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Good composition, very good.
-Flower_Girl

Great shot!!! Beautiful composition and tones.

Great comp & good moody shot. Lighting is wonderful too.

HelloRobert,
Beautiful !
Very neat composition. The tone selected suit him well.
Stéphane

  • Great 
  • tibig Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 657 W: 26 N: 681] (7565)
  • [2006-11-13 15:18]

Well composed shot. I like the play of the arcs of the bridge and roof with the curve of the track.

  • Great 
  • juanjo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 438 W: 53 N: 58] (3365)
  • [2006-11-13 15:48]

Hello Robert

nice BW composition well framed with the bridge and a very good perspectif with the railway
the contrast between the white background and the rest of the composition is very nice to look

regards

jo

  • Great 
  • A-lex Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 132 W: 54 N: 255] (2140)
  • [2006-11-13 16:20]

It´s like going back 50 years in time!
Beautiful shot! TFS
Alex

Good train station photograph, specially for the mist and the POV

wonderful shot. congrats.

Shade chosen to be this photograph is harmonious and returns well the atmosphere of railway stations at the time when there are fewer passengers. Places of crowds, as big loneliness, perfect impersonal places. Great, the curves of the bridge and the roofs of quays. A very nice success.
TSF

Very good composition, very tight, with a good use of the arch at the top. The fog definitely makes a big difference here. Nice monochrome conversion. Well done!

  • Great 
  • Tintin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2198 W: 267 N: 345] (1982)
  • [2006-11-13 20:32]

Very interesting mood in this picture, Robert, as it almost has the feel of an old picture. Very nice composition with good graphical lines and the fog is a nice bonus. Well done!

Hi Robert,
I like this! Great composition with the track leading the eye in. I also like the choice of sepia tones! TFS :-) Cheers Tina

Hello Robert !

I love the ambiance here. Thanks for keeping a few people here to add some life to the scene!
Well done !
Robert

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