Girl Poses

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• mugush (1728)
• [2007-03-30 18:38]

nice work.. good composition,,but i dont like the mate she is setting on...
thanks for sharing
love
mugush

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• beline (142)
• [2007-03-30 19:28]

HAHA! YES! Finaly you post what film you are working with... Now if we can get you to write down your shutter speed and f-stop! HA!

Picture wise, I suggest you get some form of PP tool. You need to clone out the wall on the left (white bit). I like the blanket, it adds nice texture that some people would go out of their way to eliminate. It prevents her from getting "lost" amongst blackness... The pose is nice, I like her gaze, the lighting on her neck. I would suggest a hair light of some kind, her head fades out on the top. Other than that, you are coming right along.

The invitation still stands. We have a studio, backgrounds and lights all waiting for you over here. Just call me. I even have an adapter so you can use that film body with our lights (if you didn't notice, she doesn't have a sync socket). CALLLLL. lol

TYL Jeremy.

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• voodoo (0)
• [2007-03-31 3:40]

The series is quite good..This on is my favorite.
I like the lighting very much.
I do Agree with beline about the cloning and feel it could us a bit more contrast..
I know that your lighting equipment is not the best and for now you cant do much about that but what you can do is look closer at the details. before you shoot make sure tings like lint are taken care of. and another thing....how her toes are pushing up the blanket..
Minor details that, with time, will be second nature to you to fix before you shoot.

I would also try this again but only shoot her head and shoulders, thus, minimizing all the distracting details.
Moving up buddy..Keep it coming.
Good looking model and great pose as well!
Peace.

Matt

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• appalcarp (4188)
• [2007-03-31 13:43]
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Hi Jeremy, I thought the light source was just a bit strong on her neck, but it's an excellent composition and overall an excellent photo. Spider on her foot? ;) TFS.

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• gnada (21538)
• [2007-03-31 16:31]

Hi Jeremy...
Very nice photo and composition.
It's simple, beautiful, sharp,
George

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• GreenBaron (48260)
• [2007-03-31 16:54]

Hi Jeremy,
What a excellent posting; fist the choise of the B&W / soft yellow tone, great! Secondely the pose of the woman; magnificent! De detail of the tatoo on her left foot is a very nice detail. Superb posting my friend!
Hans

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• jpinkham (1103)
• [2007-05-08 13:32]

Very nice, Jeremy. Good work with the PP -- I think the lighting and shadows come off very well. Graceful and appealing.