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The Last Berries


The Last Berries
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Copyright: Tricia Treen (ttreen) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1405 W: 130 N: 3811] (15804)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-12-02
Categories: Daily Life, Food, Nature
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/800 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-12-02 14:30
Viewed: 329
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
So this is the Last Berries on this Berry tree!
I hope all the woodland animals have stored what they need. We should be getting some snow next week!!

I took the kids today hiking. It was nice to get out.. The sun was out but the weather is changing.
It was cold and very windy! Finally some normal temps.


p.s. This was also my 1st outing with Sara; it was nice to see her looking for that shot. I'm thinking you will see some really good ones soon?



***** I took Pierre's comment and tried it in the ws!! ******
samansarraf, Josine, Werewolf, PierreFrigon, SkyF, shelbeesmom has marked this note useful
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To shelbeesmom: Thanksttreen 2 12-05 21:57
To SkyF: Thanks Skyttreen 1 12-04 08:55
To Juliet: :)ttreen 1 12-03 11:08
To PierreFrigon: Thank you Pierre!! :)ttreen 1 12-03 11:04
To Werewolf: Thank you!ttreen 1 12-03 10:59
To Josine: :)ttreen 1 12-03 10:56
To wishnugaruda: Thanksttreen 1 12-03 10:54
To Tintin: Thanksttreen 1 12-03 10:53
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Hi Tricia
It’s a marvelous shot and I believe you took it very well. Every thing is fine. I read your comment about this photo and I found it perfect. I give it useful mark.
Have a good time
Saman

Nicely captured, Tricia, but I think the berries are a tad too centered on both the horizontal & vertical lines. I am not dogmatic about the rules of third but it often works. In this case you could have cropped slightly from the left and a bit from the bottom to place the berry in the lower third or you could have positioned it that way when you composed it in the camera. Otherwise, the colours are very rich and the light is nice. Well done!

Wonderful, Tricia,
so simple but so beautiful, I like this autumn-arrangement with the nice glance on the red berries, thanks
Sabine - wishnugaruda

The colors and sharpness are excellent.
Bye bye
Josine

We can say that... The title is excellent. I did a picture lke that me too. I was impressed cause theyre was so much red on the branchs... But no leaf... Seeing on the screen i said bof... I have better to show...
Probably cause theyre is too much... Cause here just the remain of a few... i prefer...
Nice catch!

Berries from a Berry tre, who wouldv'e known???
Nice shot. I think centering them is OK since it's the only colored thing on the photo. May be could've been a nice photo for B&W with just the berries in color.
And good for your daughter. Photography will keep her out of mischief ;-)
TFS.
Pierre

Hi Tricia,
NICE lighting on this colorful berry. The sharpness is terrific TOO. Well presented TFS --Julie

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  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1666 W: 136 N: 1263] (6138)
  • [2006-12-03 20:40]
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Hello Tricia,
great shot, you captured the red berries very well. Very nice sharpness, with a great OOF BG.
Sky

Beautiful Tricia! Nice DOF and colors! I took a similar photo a few weeks back of Purple berries....great minds think alike!
B-)
Linda

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