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~ What you looking at~
Photo Information
Copyright: Sara Treen (SaraT) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 165 W: 0 N: 217] (1155)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-12-02
Categories: Humorous, Nature
Exposure: f/5.5, 1/1000 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-12-08 18:55
Viewed: 489
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is a swan at a lake in Attleboro.
Once the swan saw that I had no food she swam back into the lake.
She began to chase off ducks.
So tell me what you think.

P.s 15 more days til Christmas eve:)
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Hi,
Wonderfull capture.
Congratulations and thanks for sharing.
Kemal Mert

Very nicely captured, Sara. You are a very quick learner as this is already much better than your duck picture. However, I find it a bit dark, maybe you could have played with levels a bit to lighten the colours a bit. Otherwise, you have captured a very funny expression on his face and composed this image very nicely. Well done!

Hi Sara..this is a nice shot. You've got the composition right on here. White color is something that takes time to learn how to get the detail out of. Exposure is the key word. Focusing on something white sometimes makes everything look a little darker than it really is. Do you have some sort of photo editing program. I like this much better than your duck shot...tfs.

Nic shot Sarah, I like the sunlight shinning on her, you caught a nice reflection under her..next time include that too..:o) Nice shot and great framing too..TFS
Donna:o)



Thanks for your comment on my photo "Peace On Earth:o)

Hi Sara
Great photo. I love the detail in the photo, and the frame goes perfect with it.
TFS
Michaela

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  • Juliet Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 867 W: 64 N: 1955] (13408)
  • [2006-12-09 10:54]
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Hi Sara,
I think THIS is your BEST PHOTO YET !! I agree that it could be a bit lighter-- but the rest is really well done. Nice crisp details, POV, shadows, reflections-- an overall nice presentation. This is a Mute Swan-- see how his neck is a bit discolored?? This is from when he does his dunking to feed under water. The mud/plants stain it. Well done and TFS Julie

Princess ...I keep telling myself she is 12 but an adult Photograph!!! 12 is where life starts..bye bye to the barbies and bye the thumb to suckel on when going to bed ^__^ .. 12 is to stick posters on the wall of your room of good looking guys (am I hanging there too? ha ha ha) 12 is where you help Mom in the house etc etc...
12 ... looking to your photo's .. yes.. I would love to have a daughter like you ! Compliments from a proud Dutch uncle John Welldone on your photo work( + big hug!!)

Hi Sara,
Wow what a great picture of this beautiful swam you show here. Really sharp wfull with nice colours. I would say a ***** star picture my dear Sara!
Hans

N.B. I'm working on the Hapshepsut pictures and will sent these tonight to you OK?

Beautiful sharp photo. Well done.
TFS.
Pierre

Hello Sara

Great shot of this Cygnus olor,(mute swan).I like the composition.Very well focused with lovely natural colours.The water is a deep blue.Excellent eye contact.TFS

Rob

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