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Copyright: Jack Parker (jackwp) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 103 W: 1 N: 10] (267)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-08-29
Categories: Nature
Camera: Kodak DX4530
Exposure: f/3.4, 1/180 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-08-30 5:46
Viewed: 1033
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is a different view of a spider in my holly bush than I have submitted to T.E. ISO 120, 51mm F.L. 3X zoom (no macro).
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To Kirsten: Size of spider.jackwp 1 08-30 12:38
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nice shot!!i think it's cool you can see the back(tummy?) of the spider,you see his legs comin out.
nice colors and pov.
compo is good to, as you see a part of the web.
how big was this spider?

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2744 W: 369 N: 2624] (11948)
  • [2004-08-30 16:01]

Very nice capture, Jack. Very sharp - and I do call it - macro shot. I'm not very fond of spiders, but this one has beautiful skin marks & colours. I very much like the composition, even though the subject is centered. Nice DoF, especially noticeable in the leaves. Well done, TFS, GTF.

I have developed an appreciation for spiders since my first scary enounter the first of this summer and again later with a Black Widow! Love the "tummy shot" and these guys can be so colorful. Good shot.

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  • manny Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 24 N: 1485] (11941)
  • [2004-08-31 10:07]

Well-managed DOF. Very good compo. Maybe a little underexposure can bring out more details. JMHO.

Tres bien jack,elle est jolie aussi les couleurs sont parfaite.


ps: merçi pour la critique

amicalment coolpix

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  • egerie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 643 W: 135 N: 266] (1968)
  • [2004-09-18 23:32]

Jack this is a good macro of that spider and even for the spider's web.
Gisèle

Spiders are so intersting. I wonder how much energy a web takes out of them.

Fantastic watching them little fella's work.

Nice shot!

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