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MY BETTER HALF


MY BETTER HALF
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Copyright: Jack Parker (jackwp) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 103 W: 1 N: 10] (267)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-07-05
Categories: Mood
Camera: Kodak DX4530
Exposure: f/4.8
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-07-06 7:39
Viewed: 557
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
My first picture with a tripod. I have never taken a portrait photo before. There is always a first time.......
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say hello to your half and take more beautiful photos to share with us. Kisses from Brazil. Thaís

Hello Jack,
I think you are a heart person, very rare, very nice. I like that you made your first experiment of portrait on your wife, this is so sweet to me, and shows a sample to follow. I just married last November, but I would like to feel the same. There was a film, where the man said, it is good to be married, because someone will always see you as when you were young. I think you live in a beautiful part of Earth. I will go through on your photos, and tell what I think. Thanks for your kind words, and enjoy!
Cheers,
Marcie

Hi, Jack, congratulations for the tripod... I hate them..hehe.
But as your first portrait, and since she is a beloved person, I think you could do a post processing rework to enhance your model... the background is a little distracting. May I try a workshop?
Anyway.. the best in your photo is the title.. it shows how special you (and she) are.
Carmem

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