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"End of the World"


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Copyright: Linda Unger (shelbeesmom) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3927 W: 1074 N: 10754] (47351)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-03-08
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture, Mood, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: Canon EOS 30D, Tokina AT-X 124 PRO DX 12-24mm F4, Hoya PL-CIR 77mm
Exposure: f/4, 1/25 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-01-27 5:27
Viewed: 312
Points: 32
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
***Don't panic! Grain added intentionally for dramatic effect.

I have a favorite song now, it's called Slow Fade and it's about how it's so important to watch and guard your heart. It's about people who "sell out"...who take the easier way, the way society says they must do. They sell their souls for revenge, or lust, or money. And when they do so, it's often the end of the road for them, for their self-esteem, their relationships, and sometimes their lives.

Hate breeds hate. A burning revenge eats away at the heart of the hater. A person like this cannot be reigned in sometimes, until they have lost it all and are living on the streets, in jail or dead. A person who gives in to every whim and desire is often lead away into the pit of addiction. A man or woman who would turn their backs on their family for money is often consumed by greed, and they end up losing everything.

My favorite line in the song is: "Be careful little feet where you go, for it's the little feet behind you that are sure to follow". Our children are watching and so are many others.

I took this photo in New York City. No doubt the words "The End of the World" scrawled on the granite facade was written during the 911 disaster. I found this man sitting there, homeless, selling papers. I wondered what "god" he sold his soul to. I noticed people walking by, not caring. People don't become homeless overnight...it's a slow process, letting one thing slide. Letting one moral value slip. Compromising once to often. And one day you wake up.... homeless or in jail, or not waking up and on your way to the morgue. In America today, you do NOT have to be homeless. There are countless shelters and help available.

Do you hold to your values? Do you care? Do stand for something? Do you believe in something? Do you live for revenge? Can you let anger go? A man on the forums this past week brought up an old saying about a white dog and a black dog. Which ever one you feed the most, is the one that grows. I hope you are feeding your white dog.

Linda

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End of the WorldchrisJ 1 01-29 04:26
To kickback: So True Scottshelbeesmom 3 01-27 18:51
To boonie: Thanks Daniel!shelbeesmom 1 01-27 14:06
To Janice: Thanks Janice!!shelbeesmom 1 01-27 13:02
To rewshearer: Thanks Rew!shelbeesmom 1 01-27 11:39
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Hi Linda,
Great socio-photo from New York City. I think this shot expresses the mood there in those hard times after 9/11. The grained effect fits to its mood very well, it suggest uncertainity that those poor people on the streets surely have. Interesting note... Nice job, TFS!
PS: Thanks for yesterday's sugestion, I immediately tried it and posted on TL. :)

Greetings,
Kristof

This shot is so very New York Linda,
even without the "End of the World" written on the wall :)
Great work capturing the mood and essence of this scene.
The grain added is a nice effect too.
Nicely done.
- Vincent

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1618 W: 118 N: 2771] (11196)
  • [2009-01-27 6:28]

Hi Linda
Great street shot full of mood, and very appropriate to the days of serious world-wide crisis that we live.
Elegant sepia work and great effect with the grain.
My best regards,

Hi Linda,
powerful and touching note with strong message.
Important photo!
All my compliments,Linda :)

Hi Linda.

Very interesting title, nice noticing and very good pp work! Love it!

Have a nice day!
David

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3285 W: 785 N: 4392] (19736)
  • [2009-01-27 10:08]

Hi Linda,

Great symbiosis between your photo and your note! We don't choose to born, but after we are in life, the life is a perpetual choice that only a good self-knowledge can help us to make! Rare are the people who arrive at this lucidity. So, for everal, life is a hard adventure!

Excellent treatment with the addition of grain. This cans suggest all constraints which we must overcome to respect our choices! Very meaningful image!
Bravo! Annie

the end of the world is grainy... and it works
jc

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  • maecy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 156 W: 0 N: 240] (1530)
  • [2009-01-27 10:57]

Hi Linda!

Like your PP work, very dramatic image! like the mood..a very interesting title, good note Linda..well done!

TFS

Regards,

Mae

Good message, great grainy mood to the shot, a strong sense of anonymity in both subject and passers-by.

I like to think I have a big bouncy happy slobbering white dog, and the black one only comes out when there's a real problem to be faced. (And Internet woes shouldn't count as real problems, eh?)

Rew

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3270 W: 270 N: 7711] (32868)
  • [2009-01-27 12:51]
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Very deep thoughts Linda - well said.
The end of the world is nigh!!
Sad photo, or is he waiting for a taxi to take him home? Me being sceptical...
A friend, when in an far eastern country, saw this poor man with a wooden seat and shoe cleaning gear walk down the street. They felt sorry for him. He stopped at a Mercedes car, opened the boot, through his gear in it, and drove away!!
Good shot and your added pp work gives it a real good dramatic look
TFS
Janice

Linda
You have taken a snapshot and through your note and PP work turned it into far more. Noise is effective in the dark mood of New Yorks under belly.

Dan

HI Linda,

What a strong message and photo. Interesting composition. Looks like the homeless have given up and are just waiting for the "end of the world" to happen. Why bother doing anything? It's not that people don't care that they pass by, it's that one can't save them all. I learned to pass by them while in Paris. Heartbreaking. If you give to just one child, at least 20 will come out of the woodwork and follow you until you say no.

Interesting mood with the grain. To me, it make s it look like an old photo...this could be any decade. Yes, thought provoking. Lisa

hi linda, i like the grain, good candid idea here, i think theres a few things at play,
1) when you start drugs or booze in the beginning you have a choice to keep going on the sunday night or stop, those who keep going very soon become addicted and will probably have a life long torture with it. but they had a freakin choice in the start! once addicted your screwed!
2) mental illness is at play and thats a whole new kettle of fish! they could be screwed before they even start!
3) i always ask is this that persons fault or are they mentally ill, i think most of these people made bad choices!

i dont know i am glad i have a good job,family and friends who would intervene if they ever saw turn to booze and drugs,

good topic for discussion i think one needs to respect themselves first,
thanks,
scott

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4181 W: 407 N: 6449] (41275)
  • [2009-01-28 0:40]

Hi Linda

I've worked out that Houston is 16 hours behind east coast Australia. So if I log off at midnight, it's 8am there. I like the grain here, which adds to the gritty, urban texture. Many foreigners are shocked to find the polarized society, within the US. The Hollywood soaps rarely portray life as it is, for the down at heel. Thankyou for the reality check. Good framing with the wall & passerby. Tfs!

Waht a sad scene, very good captured.
Best wishes,
Achim

Hi Linda..heavy picture and heavy note...I like you photograph with the grain and the black and white tones..dramatic and effective...good work.

Roger

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