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Copyright: Ekaterina N A (katya534) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 759 W: 46 N: 117] (5546)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-12
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-12-03 8:55
Viewed: 470
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
107th Army - Navy game in Philadelphia, PA.

What do you think about this focus?
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Hello Ekaterina,

Excellent work, great details, very crisp, I like the focus on the not so obverouse person Excllent colors and POV Nice work

TFS kyle

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  • yttt Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 270 W: 10 N: 3] (2114)
  • [2006-12-03 9:13]
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good theme, you shot in the right moment but this picture needs balanced POV - realy

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  • dynax3 (27)
  • [2006-12-03 9:26]

nice shot...
nice compo...
nice moment...
how about the focus is on the man (IMHO)
nice pic...

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  • Shogun Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 832 W: 52 N: 418] (10391)
  • [2006-12-03 12:41]

hi Katya. beautiful composition and approach.
very sporty, nice colors and details on the
eyes. nice one. Tfs

Shogun

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  • lucbus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2115 W: 92 N: 1855] (10309)
  • [2006-12-03 17:28]
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Hi Katya,
I like this perfect focus on the eye of the girl that are so clear and full of emotion. I'm just not sure about the missing focus on the man, it looks strange at first but more I look at the photo like this the more I like it with the increase impact it does on the girl. Very beautiful composition.
Greetings.
Luc

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  • linus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1477 W: 10 N: 738] (10767)
  • [2006-12-03 18:38]

Hi Katya,
Very nice true life moment. Well done.
Sunil

Hello Katya,

Agreeing with Luc, the more I looked at this photograph the more I like the choice you made here. The DOF with the focus on the woman seems to give the shot a nice balance. Even though the man is not in focus he is not over powered by the woman who is sharply in focus. My eyes keep going to the man first but then drawn to the in focus woman and her emotional face. Great capture Katya and I hope you enjoyed the game and your time in Philly! We can certainly tell that you sat on the Navy side of the stadium.

Love and Peace Always,
Kevin

The colors, composition, mood...everything is ok..and yes.. the unsharpness on him is a bit confusing (his shoulder is sharp for a start... )Still nice to see these youngsters backing-up there team ..TFS
John

very nice and colorful ekaterina. i like the impression on the girl's face. well captured.

Hi Ekaterina

Excelente toma

Nat

Привет, Катя !

Отличный кадр, забавный.
А у нас ВСЕ ЕЩЕ НЕТ СНЕГА. Плюс восемь по Цельсию ;)

Малик и Маша.

Good work. Concerning focus -- I would prefer to have more DOF in this shot. Just to close aperture at 2 steps.
v.

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