Self Portrait

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• jackal (2859)
• [2008-10-12 17:56]
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Hi Eda,
A great self portrait, the focus and skin tones are excellent - not easy doing a self portrait from inside a car but having an attractive model helps.
well done
Jack

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• gnada (21679)
• [2008-10-12 20:07]
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Hi Eda...

Very beautiful self portrait of a very lovely model..!
I like it...

Congratulations!
George

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• Mujahid-Awais (5553)
• [2008-10-12 20:21]
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You are a Beautiful. Very good pose and expressions.

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• chrysalis (323)
• [2008-10-12 22:46]
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The pose is nice (although a bit "fake"), but the image suffers technically.

- The background is distracting, both because it's not out of focus and due to the distracting highlights

- The White Balance is a tad on the cool side

- The image suffers from lack of depth (both because there are no OOF areas, and because - perhaps - of PP procedure that has created a "plastic" look, without proper tone gradation)

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• szatanowska (3043)
• [2008-10-13 1:37]
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beautiful EDA!

Congrats!
TFS

kisses

Ania

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• mukesh (4777)
• [2008-10-13 3:28]
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Hi Eda
Have tried a WS - It is a beautiful picture
Mukesh

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• Arindam_1984 (245)
• [2008-10-13 8:05]
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hey Eda

very good portrait my dear friend....
well done...

one complement.
u r very goodlooking
:-)

Regards
Arindam

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• Fortuna (18757)
• [2008-10-13 14:12]
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Hello Eda,

Excellent self portrait!
Beautiful eyes, eyebrows and lips!
Great definition and contrast!
Congratulations and TFS.
Sergio

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• trekks (13589)
• [2008-10-16 16:14]
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hello Eda

You look straight into the camera and pretty in the eyes here. It is not easy to look good in portrait when shooting inside the car. The motion blur is showing on the face. But it is great to see you here.

The best portrait will be to shoot at window or door of your house using natural light and the dark background through the door. Then you can do good justice to the natural skin tone.

tfs, bill

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• jone (28658)
• [2008-10-22 3:24]

...more than a beautiful eyes...TFS
Best wishes,
J ;)))

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• Silvio2006 (42489)
• [2009-05-14 22:43]
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• ramon (3239)
• [2009-05-20 8:59]
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Hi Eda,

Very nice portrait.

TFs,
Ramon

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• Athila (1773)
• [2009-05-20 19:57]
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Bonsoir Eda,

Nice selfportrait. It's not that easy to anticipate the expression, the head position and and the overall result. you did very good here. Focus on the eyes is a little soft, but still very good. I am quite amazed. You are very "photographic" and also very "photogenic". Great works and TFS.

Alain

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• foozi (4596)
• [2009-05-21 1:58]
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Hi Eda,
thnks for liking my flower shot.
Youre beautiful, and this photo depict the simple and natural presentation of your portrait.
Very pleasant look especially the casual eyes.
The attraction is the colour of the blouse harmonise with your skin tones.
Well presented.

Regards,
Foozi

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• drackness (3722)
• [2009-05-25 12:51]
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Pretty... really pretty... and this one is a really selfportrait... i like this... congratulations by this... and you look very pretty... TFS...