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Shallow


Shallow
Photo Information
Copyright: Dennis Starkey (starkey666) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 908 W: 8 N: 270] (2748)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-10-28
Categories: Nature
Camera: NIKON D 70, Sigma 70-300mm, Hoya 58mm Skylight
Exposure: f/8, 1/100 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-11-01 23:04
Viewed: 560
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Took this shot walking along side of the road at the bank of Lake Redman.It shows the rocks gradually getting deeper in the water and drifting away. I converted to black and white using the channel mixer, 27-36-37. Sharpened and resized for TL.

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To Shutter2Think: rocksstarkey666 1 11-01 23:55
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Hi Dennis,
Boy, you were literal on this. This is shallow...and dirty. I have to ask...are the rocks white from the channel mixer or are we talking bird poop? Anyhow, nice b&w conversion. Nice shot.
Take care.
Richard

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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1286 W: 153 N: 729] (8681)
  • [2005-11-02 17:34]

Hi Dennis.
This is kind of a strange photo. Unusual Composition but I like the way you play with the shadows. It's great.
Congratulations.
Luci

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  • hojper Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 687 W: 111 N: 847] (4087)
  • [2005-11-09 15:43]

Why did you convert to black and white? I think it shows even less than it did it colour. As a photo of very little I find it quite original though. I tried to flip it 180 degrees. Interesting. That shows it must have some attraction I guess.

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  • Fisher Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1254 W: 351 N: 944] (5728)
  • [2005-11-13 16:24]

Hi Dennis,

Yep, interesting, well done on the composition. You did well with the conversion.
A tad much on the rocks, a little less needed there.
Excellent work.

Mike

Very nice one Dennis, I love it. It looks like smog over the rocks, a very good shot!
Best regards
Guy

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  • letr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1162 W: 419 N: 1111] (6780)
  • [2005-12-02 12:41]

Like the way you captured this and the conversion works here Dennis..good shot !!

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