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Portrait of the Dog as a Young Lady


Portrait of the Dog as a Young Lady
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Copyright: Rik Carlson (monkeywithwings) (215)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-01-07
Categories: Pets
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Friday theme 2009/01/09 Portrait of... [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-01-08 4:15
Viewed: 398
Points: 1
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  • mortcdz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 1265 W: 197 N: 17] (53)
  • [2009-01-10 13:23]

From the thumbnail I couldn't understand why this was uncritiqued, but on opening up the picture there are some obvious problems. The non-central composition is good but this is overhsadowed by :
The exposure is a little harsh - the white of the snow is burnt out in places and there are no true blacks in the picture
Details in the dog are extremely soft - it's hard to see where the point of focus is on the picture
And lastly the lack of a photographers note doesn't help either - on TL its better to tell people a little about the shot or the subject matter.



Thanks...Mark

Hi Rik
Sorry I ahve to agree with everything that Mark has said.

Thanks for joining the theme though
regards
Tracey

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