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Vermont
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Copyright: JP Candelier (jcandeli) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 853 W: 100 N: 348] (3985)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-05
Categories: Nature, Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: NIKON D 70, Nikon 18-70mm
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-08-04 14:31
Viewed: 671
Points: 21
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Went hiking with my sister and reminded me of why I love Vermont in the summer so much.

It was a very hazy day so most of my photos are hazy. I will post a close up as a *** WORKSHOP ***.

The colors seem a bit off to me. Need to be warmer I think.

Suggestions welcome.
JP

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  • fer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 791 W: 131 N: 909] (8073)
  • [2005-08-04 14:42]
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Hi JP,

Great view of this landscape!I want to be there too for enjoy this view.Nic shot.
Fernando

Hi JP,

I prefer this one because of the colours and I like the wide sky! On your workshop I prefer the position of your sister.

Great view on the landscape indeed. Nice shot,

Nino

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  • samr Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 758 W: 44 N: 433] (3323)
  • [2005-08-04 15:34]

Nice composition on this one - the haze creates a nice mood and the colours (on this monitor) appear quite nicely. Good DOF and POV. Found the workshop one choppy without the full view we get here. Nicely done, Sam

Hi JP,
Nice shot! I like your vertical composition in this one because it lets us take in not only the forest, but, also the cloudy sky. And, in my opinion, cloudy skies are usually better than blue ones. I also like the lightening up of the hills with the haze. I think this one's better than the workshop. Good work! How much warmer would you go? Not much, I hope...you do have clouds and haze. Ummm...I think you have your ws misworded...it's not a closeup...it actually looks a little wider than this shot, I'm thinking.
Take care!
Richard

Hi JP,
I love open spaces!! I can feel the depth :))
Yes I prefer this one in comparison with the one you put in workshop.
I made another workshop for you with a little warmer colours.
cheers
ToM

JP! Finally this scenery u decided to put up! I still owe you one though!

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4263 W: 414 N: 6807] (42646)
  • [2005-08-05 8:10]

Hi JP

A superb view from the lookout, & the hiker adds scale & context. Congratulations!

A great scenery I like the vertical frame and the subject at the bottom of the frame. Well done!

underrated image imho, beautiful comp, great capture of 'space', (*_*)

very cool view JP
we don't get to see huge open space like this in Singapore :) i like it a lot

i see 3 small black dots in the sky...are those birds?

Hey JP, what a brilliant shot. Beautiful landscape and great composition. I love it. As for the colors, I wouldn't change anything. I think they look natural (PERFECT!!!). Best wishes!

Vermont look a very nice place to visit..
A good composition and a good choice to have such a high format..
This is well done
I like it
Jean Michel

nice shot but too much sky. way too much sky because it isn't particularly attractive.

massive crop here in my opinion..at least half of the shot..would have preferred more focus on her.

of course looking at the comments i see im alone in my view.. but hey thats why we are here

edit: liked the workshop better. not sure if this one still deserves points JP hee hee :)

edit part II: I will give u one point JP just cause its your sister

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