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Copyright: ToM Pelle (chiquito) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 470 W: 121 N: 520] (3400)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 1997-07
Categories: Friends/Family, Portrait
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Smiles, Pessoas, Photos that makes me smile [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-09-19 4:23
Viewed: 2339
Favorites: 4 [view]
Points: 68
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another shot from San Juan, P.R.! :)
The 2 reason I post this one:

1, Tanya is a good friend of mine and I haven't seen here for 8 years! She just turned 25 on 17th September and this is the last capture of her in my mind since I left Puerto Rico!

2, This is my very first portrait photo I've ever made!!

FELIZ CUMPLEAÑOS CHIQUITA!!!

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PP: scanned from negative, desaturated and played a bit with contrast!

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Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To rewshearer: Smilechiquito 1 07-11 05:50
To puffy: Tanyachiquito 1 04-13 09:04
To fotogigifoto: Grazie...chiquito 1 11-09 16:34
To LuciG: Merci Luci!...chiquito 1 09-29 10:55
To law: smilechiquito 1 09-29 06:05
To vsinopoulos: thxchiquito 1 09-27 06:39
To lucbus: thxchiquito 1 09-27 06:26
To Jancie: Happychiquito 1 09-22 20:32
To camilabessa: Tanyachiquito 1 09-22 13:19
To himajyothi: Hellllllllllooooooooooooooooooooo! :)chiquito 2 09-22 08:35
To Maria74: Beautychiquito 1 09-21 18:13
To stecotdon: Hi Stef,chiquito 1 09-21 09:35
To iliannak: birthday gift!chiquito 3 09-20 13:14
To Tintin: thxchiquito 2 09-20 07:57
To Lisar: cropchiquito 1 09-20 06:39
To Dawn: cheerschiquito 1 09-20 06:27
To nofer: thxchiquito 1 09-20 03:57
To calianebessa: thank you...chiquito 1 09-20 03:52
To balkermay: thxchiquito 1 09-19 13:29
To ciore: ThXchiquito 1 09-19 13:28
To jcandeli: Bonitachiquito 3 09-19 09:27
To marcocig: Smilechiquito 1 09-19 08:51
To tournesol: thxchiquito 1 09-19 08:38
To clix_stuff: Smilechiquito 3 09-19 07:33
To maleentjeh: killer smilechiquito 1 09-19 07:21
To ajcsousa: Smilechiquito 1 09-19 07:19
To ropetko: Portraitchiquito 1 09-19 07:00
To ajnviper: smilechiquito 1 09-19 06:42
To masuria: thxchiquito 1 09-19 06:39
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nice photo, i hope you find your friend very shortly,

regards,
yogesh

Nice portrait shot, the hair flowing, the smile is great... definitely time for a new version to see if all the smiles are still this wide...

Great portrait shot, exactly as it suppose to be! Excellent smile, crystal sharp eyes, leaned head with hair on the side... Great compositon with eyes and lips on left (upper and lower) thirds! Great, reminds me of my best portrait, this photo is really something I will do the same manner. I am glad to see someone with similar technique :))

Great job, regards
Robert

Hi Tom,
Very nice portrait. Her smile it's contagious :)
Hope you ear from her soon.
Regards, António

What a killer smile ! Great portrait, ToM. Love it !

Marleen

A very infectious smile your friend has!! And Lovely sparkling eyes too!! An excellent portrait! TFS
Cheers.

Very nice portrait, Tom! Very good use of the ambient light and an excellent composition. I particularly like the close crop and the small tilt in her pose. A lovely portrait of a lovely lady!

Irresistible smile!!! The model is wonderful, the shot too...

You caught the right moment.

Well done

Marco

This is your first?? You did better then most pros! ;)
Wow, she is cute. Great smile and eyes. Beautiful lighting. A great portrait! JP

Szia Tom,
lovely portrait and for a very first one ... compliments !!! moreover an excellent birthday gift :o)
i want the same for my birthday ;o)
regards,
ili

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  • ciore Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 806 W: 2 N: 100] (2292)
  • [2005-09-19 11:27]
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regards,Girl, regards Tom, you did a good and nice job!
She's and looks wonderful!
;-)

Hello Tom... I think you have taken a great portrait... Her smile is great and very natural... I do like the naturalness in portraits... Excellent...

Can

What a beautiful smile from a beautiful lady in a beautiful portrait, ToM. Nice composition with great light and nice work on the PP treatment. I really like the wind in her hair which gives this portrait a very natural feel. Well done!

Oh that's such a beautiful homage to your friend!
your portrait is very good!! specially for being the first! her smile is beautiful, you captured it very well!

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  • nofer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 853 W: 272 N: 495] (1724)
  • [2005-09-20 1:19]
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Linda moça... Lindo sorriso...He... He...
Muito bom retrato!
Excelente contraste.
Muito bom trabalho.
TFS
Reynaldo

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  • Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1149 W: 100 N: 3432] (17508)
  • [2005-09-20 5:25]
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Great portrait of your friend Tom,.. you did an excellent job here....

She looks very lovely and happy...

Regards
Dawn :-))

yes, the smile from the West Side Story - no make up, no styling, no flashes, no games. Just joyous eyes, ice-meting smile and hair to dream on...

Don't take it pls as a spoiler, but I would have loved to see a bit more of her shoulders, as that would have added to sensuality of the shot.

Its your first and its super. Packed with lovely positive emotions.

ComplimentS!

Lovely portrait Tom,

Great expresion , nice eyes and very genuine smile. tones are very good and very well composed and wel presented image.

Well done!

take care, Stef :))

Hi Tom,
what a beauty! she's so lovely! and you did a very good portrait of her, Tom. I love the slight grain here and colour tones. Great job, really!
regards,
M:)

WOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW ToM! She is BEAUTIFUL and that smile is very captivating.. .Very natural and looks very hmmm... hmmm... CLEAN! WOW! Great portrait... I hope U find her soon and yes! Please give her my wishes too :D.. Thanks for sharing this :)

Take care...
- Hima.

Tanya is a very pretty girl... congratulations!

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3302 W: 275 N: 7975] (32365)
  • [2005-09-22 20:18]
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Hey ToM, lovely girl, and super portrait of her. At 17 she looks so happy and carefree, and I love her 'irresistible smile!!!' (quoting Marco) Good job, especially for your first portrait.

Your first attempt in portraiture is a success! Nicely composed, good detail and good lighting. I like it very much and Tanya has a lovely smile.TFS
Vassilis

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  • lucbus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2137 W: 92 N: 1935] (10498)
  • [2005-09-26 18:40]
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Excellent portrait, I like this large smile and her expression which is full of joy. TFS
Luc

Good portrait. She is beautiful.

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  • law Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 509 W: 75 N: 80] (1764)
  • [2005-09-28 8:39]
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What a sweet smile..& beautiful portrait you have here. I like the composition & the colors. Good work.

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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1352 W: 154 N: 728] (8654)
  • [2005-09-29 9:54]
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Hi Tom!
Son sourrire .. nous laisse bouche-bé! C'est un excellent portrait, une bonne définition, une excellente mise au point .. Un photo qui, lorsqu'on la regarde, on ne peut s'empecher de sourrire également! Une belle dédicace, et le choix du N&B, sans aucun doute le meilleur!
Félicitations!
Luci

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  • samr Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 758 W: 44 N: 433] (3323)
  • [2005-10-02 1:20]

Really nice - she is pretty, her smile priceless and your composition, exposure and POV are fantastice. TFS, Sam..

Perfect for me...
Tomasz

Hi Tom,
excellent portrait.....excellent!
Regards
Ciao
Gigi

I guess I haven't left a note? But this shot has been among my favorites for some time, so there... And I have just moved it to my "Portraits to learn From" theme. You should know why. :)

Learning points: (1) Grain can be reeeeaaallllly beautiful. (2) Nothing like a full genuine smile. (3) Unruly hair rulez. :)

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1835 W: 128 N: 3018] (16615)
  • [2006-04-05 4:15]
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Awesome shot ToM, she is a very pretty girl...:)I like your colour choice, B&W is good on this one, just awesome... TFS

This is a beautiful portrait Tom - she is absolutely gorgeous and her smile lights up the entire shot. I admire the composition and DOF of this as well. Your photographs are extraordinary and this one is just brilliant.
TFS
Rew

Great portrait of a beutiful young woman.

Beautiful portrait, charming girl. Your first portrait is a great success.

Andreea

Hi Tom,

Nice emotional expression. Well framed.
TFS,

Srimal

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