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Kite


Kite
Photo Information
Copyright: Pierrette Marie Guindon (PierretteMarie) (83)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-03-25
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon EOS Rebel XT (350D)
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-03-27 18:32
Viewed: 358
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
A little girl on the beach with her kite
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Hi Pierette

A cute moment.

With your camera it should have been possible to get a sharper view of this, unfortunately the exif (shutter, ISO etc.) data wasn't brought across with the photo so I can't comment any further on your camera settings.

I do think it would make a more powerful photo if you did not have your subject in the middle. "Rule of thirds" is a good guideline to use - place your subject 1/3rd of the way across the frame and it will look better to most people.

I've tried a workshop for you.

Rew

Hello Pierrette,
A cute scene, indeed, but as Rew points out, it could have been stronger with more sharpness and a better composition. Oh yes: if you could have waited for just a second before taking the photo, then we could have seen the child and the kite seperately, with some empty space between them. I think that would have given a more powerful image as well. But I know how hard it is to "click" on the right moment when taking "spontaneous" photos.
Anyway, interesting work.
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

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