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Florida Beach


Florida Beach
Photo Information
Copyright: Jamie Smith (JLJ05) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 27 W: 1 N: 5] (150)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-06-24
Categories: Friends/Family
Camera: Kodak EasyShare CX7430
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/750 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-03-09 22:36
Viewed: 571
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is my little brother Bryce, running on the beach. He wasnt posing though it may look as if so. He was just being a kid... and he was scared of the water so he wouldnt even go up to his knees.
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To gardenwife: about the croppingJLJ05 1 07-21 06:01
To Sneza: thanks for the workshopJLJ05 2 07-21 05:11
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Excellent composition here, Jamie. You've caught your brother in mid-action in a good pose. Nice work!

I like your caption.
Gomposition is good, maybe I would cut off upper part with sky.
Nice colors.
Well done.

I love the composition of this shot; I don't know how much cropping you did, but what you did was very effective. The exposure's good, too. Your brother's movement, plus his being on the side of the frame, is just perfect. Love it!

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