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Walk Away


Walk Away
Photo Information
Copyright: Maryori Munoz (colombiana) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 13 W: 0 N: 26] (198)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-11-08
Categories: Decisive Moment
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/13 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-11-10 14:17
Viewed: 205
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Walk away
Take the dawn
After dreamy kiss
Breaks my heart.

Walk away
Take my soul
After body heat
Evaporates to dread.

Walk away
Take my needs
After careless words
Lie meaningless.

Walk away
Take my life
After time escapes
Into darkened pain

Walk away
Take my tears
After warring battles
Settle into dust.

Walk away
Take my love
After broken vows
Dissolve into despair.

Julie Donner Andersen
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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 740 W: 61 N: 1255] (6932)
  • [2008-11-15 14:47]

Nice verse Maryori and a veri imaginative combination of foto as well
TFS
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