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Sunset
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Copyright: Fran King (sugah_bear69) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 601 W: 62 N: 1227] (4362)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-05-18
Categories: Decisive Moment
Camera: Canon PowerShot A70, Canon Zoom Lens 3X 5.4-16.2mm 1.2 8-4.8
Exposure: f/4.8, 1/640 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-05-23 13:43
Viewed: 602
Points: 40
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note

Is this the little girl I carried?
Is this the little boy at play?
I don't remember growing older
When did they?

When did she get to be a beauty?
When did he get to be so tall?
Wasn't it yesterday when they
Were small?

Sunrise, Sunset
Sunrise, Sunset
Swiftly flow the days
Seedlings turn overnight to sunflowers
Blossoming even as we gaze

Sunrise, Sunset
Sunrise, Sunset
Swiftly fly the years One season following another
Laden with happiness and tears

What words of wisdom can I give them?
How can I help to ease their ways?
Now they must learn from one another
Day by day

They look so natural together
Just like two newlyweds should be
Is there a canopy in store
For me?

Sunrise, Sunset
Sunrise, Sunset
Swiftly fly the years
One season following another
Laden with happiness and tears.

Sunrise Sunset
(From the Broadway Musical Fiddler On The Roof)




Thank you for the visit!
Fran


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Softening tool in spots
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To silycat: Sorry,sugah_bear69 1 02-09 18:08
To yas_ank: Hi Yasin,sugah_bear69 1 06-03 18:39
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Hi Fran,

Well done on this capture and composition. Beautiful view.

Mike

Soft mood here and I love the poem.
TFS
Loon

Good one yet again Fran. Love the song played along with the image.

TFS

ML

again, stunning colours, Fran, and you are making extremely good use of 'the Louisiana Eiffeltowers', love that song, aahh thanx, M, (*_*)

Hi Fran,
Very beautiful sunset!
Well done
Deniz.

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3270 W: 270 N: 7711] (32868)
  • [2006-05-23 17:28]
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Super image Fran! Lovely view and colours, and the song fits perfectly.
TFS
Janice

Hello Fran,

Beautiful capture, I adored this
lukewarm tone and the towers enriching
still more his picture.
Congratulations, I adored to see that!

Sérgio

Hello Fran, this one I like very much too. But maybe even better than the other one. The sunset is so nice and big. Good halo without making any lens defractions.

There is just one thing that I am wondering what it is, it's the black form in the fg of the 2 persons.

Because we cannot see it quite well it is very odd.

Overall, very well done! Cheers, Yan :)

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  • sufi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 720 W: 7 N: 106] (1336)
  • [2006-05-23 22:10]
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Hi Fran...
Another wonderful sunset and beatiful perspective, my friend... The ambience, colors and light are perfect... Also great point of view and...
TFS...
Stay well..
Salim.

Hi Fran,
this is a very nice sunset, I like this line of electric "pilones" with these great sunset colors and the addiction of the 2 walker that seems to walk to there future walking in the sun. Very well done.
Luc

Incredible colors and composition. I am starting to like those "Eiffeltowers" more and more(wonder if the power lines are tapping in the energy from the sun Lol) Nicely done Fran. TFS

Paul

Hi Fran,

I didn't have to wait too long to see this one, unlike some :).
Wonderful POV, beautiful soft colours and lovely semi silhouettes of the people. TFS and hugssssssss,
David

Your in a minefield with this photo Fran, but you came out in one piece, you did very well. Compliments on a VERY tricky situation ^_^ TFS and hugz
John

points later

Hi Fran
Very very nice composition. Perfect sun set.
Beautiful symetris electric column.
Well done. Thanks for sharring.

Kerem

fran,
great angle here. you have managed to blend the elements very well. good color composition.

Here's the real explosion of the sun!
That other more cropped plan is great! With a light on it!

awesome photo Fran, lovel the line caused by the power lines

wonderful capture

jaco

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  • Viking Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 996 W: 63 N: 782] (4383)
  • [2006-05-27 13:24]
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A job well done
Rob
Green later

Great match of the photo with the lyrics Fran. I like the effect of your PP work - a really nice overall result.

One of my favorite old songs, and a gorgeous sunset to match. Well done, Fran!

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  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1666 W: 136 N: 1263] (6138)
  • [2006-05-31 8:15]
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Hi Fran,
wonderful shot, excellent details, great colors and super composition.
TFS..Sky

Hello Fran.
Very nice capture and sunset, well done.
Thanks for sharing.

Yasin.

Hi Fran!
The everlasting romantic subject of two lovers walking of in sunset, well done classic revival!
I don't like those electric posts they spoiled nice nature sea view.

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