While Mommy Watches...

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• OeilMagique (3351)
• [2007-02-19 14:12]
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Allô Fran

Good family photo of a watchful mom. Like your composition with mother to the side of image and baby trying to get away for some adventure. Well presented with the focus made on the young.

Paul

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• woody (706)
• [2007-02-19 14:13]
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awww.... thats a real cute baby swan... really cute!! :D I don't want your fascination to stop with them if you can produce such nice results :)
One suggestion though, It might have worked better if you could have kept the angle slightly more to the left and a little behind, just enough to show a bit more of the mum while still maintaining the focus on the baby. Having said that, I still understand the effort behind such a shot and hence a full smiley :P
Regards,
Varun

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• Refugee (25502)
• [2007-02-19 15:20]
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Nicely done Fran with the attention on the cygnet where it should be. Good colour and lovely detail. TFS,
David

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• geterdone (755)
• [2007-02-19 15:47]
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Hi Fran,
I'd be tempted to crop Mommy swan out, but I see what you was going for I think.
Focus on the babe is super...and the water is so real looking...hope it doesn't spill out into my monitor!?!

Lyndon

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• cstathoulis (13309)
• [2007-02-19 17:46]
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Hi Fran,

A rather touching moment you captured here! Great POV & tight crop which places more emphasis on the young one!

Well done
Constantinos

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• sorin_m (1863)
• [2007-02-19 18:02]
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A sweet and touching composition.
It goes to my favorites.
tfs
sorin

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• lilimih33 (14271)
• [2007-02-19 19:03]
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Hello Fran!
Lovely composition with great colours and clarity!
Excellent done!
Lili

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• Pops71 (2089)
• [2007-02-19 21:35]
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Hi Fran,
What a nice baby! Very sharp photo and well. Excellent PP, POV, DOF and colors.
TFS
Cheers
Pierre

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• Josine (4069)
• [2007-02-20 3:27]
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Very cute. It takes a tender yey to spot this:-)
Bye bye
Josine

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• JohnTulip (36196)
• [2007-02-20 4:16]
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Yes, Mommy is watching you very carefully. Fran, tendor moment, well composed. :-)

John

ps: No Mardi Gras shots !!!

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• harpya (40)
• [2007-02-20 6:45]
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Hi Fran

Beautiful!!

I see that the family is wonderful. Zealous mother for his son. The results are wonderful.
Visual and big beautiful shot!
Congratulations

Sérgio

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• cloverstar (21277)
• [2007-02-20 7:53]
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A very tender moment with the mother looking on at her baby. Good composition.

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• PierreFrigon (15459)
• [2007-02-20 8:20]
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Very good capture. very emotional also.
Good sharpness and clarity.
TFS
Pierre

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• vandana2923 (22199)
• [2007-02-20 12:42]
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Cuttie swan here. Lovely composition Fran. And YES, I'm too waiting to see Mardi Gras shots *_^. :) Vandana

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• wylmaC (385)
• [2007-02-21 21:24]
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Run away little duckie....I hear the theme from Jaws eeeeeeeekkkkkkkk!

Lol Just kidding very cuddly!


W

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• Werewolf (26138)
• [2007-03-09 21:17]
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I can see she have all her attention on the baby from that angle. Before having camera i was observing sometime impressive movement to save the eggs or baby... By exemple a mother who fail have a broken wing... Running... Animal will follow and as they are enough away she fly :)
Ohto is of a good light! Details are peacefull for the eyes and sharp!

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• pablominto (27446)
• [2007-04-08 4:26]
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Hello Fran,
A funny situation, well captured!
Cute too of course, and that little fellow seems pretty confident with the water...
Good textures and attractive colours, bold framing works with me!
Greetings,
Pablo -