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Sunshine (Emotion – Delight)


Sunshine (Emotion – Delight)
Photo Information
Copyright: Werner Dirla (werdir) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 487 W: 34 N: 518] (2295)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 1985
Categories: Daily Life, Friends/Family
Camera: Nikon D90, AF-S DX VR Nikkor 18-105mm f/3.5-5.6G ED, 67 mm Hoya UV
Exposure: f/8, 1/60 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Friday theme 2009/06/05 "Emotion" [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-06-05 8:07
Viewed: 155
Points: 26
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I had a difficult time finding a photo for this week’s Friday theme. Sure, I have plenty of shots with people smiling, but didn’t find anything that I thought was really suitable. Then I looked around and saw one of my favorite 35 mm film shots of my mother with my young(at the time) daughter. Though my mom passed away many years ago, this photo really captures the joy she had in being a grandmother (or Oma as she liked to be called by my kids). She called my daughter her sunshine and in a quiet moment explained to me the reason why.

Since my scanner is kaput, I mounted my DSLR on an old, but versatile tripod and took several shots with different light sources, but no flash. After adjusting sharpness, colors and contrast I added the border, which I thought worked well with this shot.

Not one of my best shots, but one of my best shots.

Thanks for viewing.
szekelykristof, Sharpshooter, tedesse, chrisJ, jan515, Beger, muhammadtariq, andrzej has marked this note useful
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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To muhammadtariq: Thank you Muhammadwerdir 1 06-09 16:24
To ShellyOB: Thank you Shellywerdir 1 06-07 13:02
To Beger: Thank you Anniewerdir 1 06-07 12:57
To Silvio2006: Thank you Silviowerdir 1 06-07 12:54
To jurek1951: Thank you Georgwerdir 1 06-07 05:18
To jan515: Thank you Januszwerdir 1 06-07 05:13
To chrisJ: Thank you Chriswerdir 1 06-06 08:18
To tedesse: Thank you Tadeuszwerdir 1 06-06 05:06
To Janice: Thank you Janicewerdir 1 06-06 04:52
To Sharpshooter: Thank You Scottwerdir 1 06-06 04:43
To Dot: Thank youwerdir 1 06-05 16:48
To szekelykristof: Thank you.werdir 1 06-05 09:42
To cosy: framingwerdir 1 06-05 09:31
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  • Needs Improvement 
  • cosy (62)
  • [2009-06-05 8:56]
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Mauvais cadrage, sujet beaucoup trop à gauche, arrière plan à droite trop présent , devrait être éliminé par un recadrage ou en assombrissant ces éléments distrayant

cosy

Hi Werner,
This is quite a good photo for this week's Friday Theme, which is quite difficult in my opinion. You did a great job with your DSLR playing a scanner, quality is very fine. I was born in the year of the photo. :) I like this framing, too. Well done, my friend, TFS!
Best regards,
Kristof

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1382 W: 31 N: 3009] (12094)
  • [2009-06-05 15:01]
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HI Werner
You did an excellent job of reproducing such a tender moment with your set up. Your mom had such a glow of pride in her eye. Perhaps not your best but certainly one of your best memories.
Well done
Dot

Hi Werner,
Nice choice for the theme. Funny how you took a photo of a photo, clever thinking since your scanner has given up the ghost. It came out quite well considering. What a great memory, I bet your daughter really cherishes this shot too.

TFS,
Scott.

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3270 W: 270 N: 7711] (32868)
  • [2009-06-05 20:12]
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Hi Werner, how delightful to see this photo of your mother and her Sunshine. I know the thrill of having grandchildren, and this is just beautiful
Thank you
Janice

Hello!
Wonderful double portrait!
Splendid colours and light,good sharpness.
Very well done
Greetings
Tadeusz

Hi Werner

A good snapshot of 2 generations. The theme here is about 'Emotion', & this is a very appropriate image for that genre, despite the minor technical imperfections. If you were a professional portraiture photographer, then the 1st critique just might be justified. Have a great weekend!

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  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2498 W: 56 N: 3862] (17478)
  • [2009-06-06 12:39]
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Hello Werner,
This is wonderful 2 generations shot.A good illustration. The details are very well visible. Very good composition.
Regards.
Janusz

Hi Werner,
Wonderful family portrait,Good colors/tones, sharpness and details.
Georg

Ciao Werner, beautiful dpuble portrait, splendid smile for your mother, very well done, have a good Sunday, ciao Silvio

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3287 W: 785 N: 4402] (19782)
  • [2009-06-07 9:08]
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Hi Werner,
There are a lot of this kind of spontaneous snapshots in our family albums! This is not a matter about their technical quality! What we search in them is the emotion rememberance of this moment!
This is what I see here! And this is the theme for that!
You have a great chance to have a so happy photo of your mom! Keep it preciously, and if you have taste to do a light blurred work on the background, this will be still better!
Regards! Annie

Hello, Werner,
though the quality may have suffered from the clever way you've managed to preserve this shot, the emotion is palpable. The lighting and color is still really good and the love and pride is very visible on your mother's face. Beautifully captured and a perfect addition to the weeks's theme. Well done! Many thanks and kindest wishes,
Shelly

absolutlly stunning.I can see the love in the eye of your mother which only a mother posses.I salute her.TFS

HiWerner
Excellent addition to the theme.
Great portrait,good colours and fine details.
TFS and for joining in the theme.
Regards
Andrzej

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