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End of the Tracks


End of the Tracks
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Copyright: Jaime Tafoya (Jaimeson) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 36 W: 1 N: 10] (193)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-08-06
Categories: Transportation
Camera: Konica Minolta Dimage Z5
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-08-09 11:19
Viewed: 402
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The Durham Amtrak station is around the corner from my apartment. The tracks run towards and away from the complex, but the tracks near where I live are no longer in use.
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To LuciG: Thanks Luciana!Jaimeson 1 09-11 14:10
To smoothdude: Thanks...Jaimeson 1 08-10 10:58
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I like the black and white and the subject matter is interesting, but something is lacking with the composition but I really can't put my finger on it what I'd like to see differently. Possibly shot from a different angle, maybe a lower or higher point of view. Sorry I can't be more specific. I do like this though, thanks for sharing.

Jamie... super collection of shapes, contrasts, lines and textures in this. Very nicely seen and presented. I like the detail and toning in this as well.

All the best.

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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1286 W: 153 N: 729] (8681)
  • [2005-09-11 13:40]
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Hi Jaime!

Une image autentique et mise en valeur par l'excellent choix du N&B!


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